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1 Zakad the Bear dog on 13/12/16, 09:23 am

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Name: Zakad
Tier: D
Type: Normal
Species: Bear Dog
Appearance: Zakad is 198.12 centimeters tall, and insanely furry. The Giant brown dog
Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Camofur
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: To have Adaptable hair
Trait Description: Most Animals, especially the bear dog, have a unique ability when hunting their prey, and that is the ability to change their fur at will in accordance to whatever environment they happen to be present in at the time.
Trait Effect:
Zakad can create Camouflage blending in with his surroundings in order to catch his prey off guard. To anyone D-tier they might not notice it right off the bat but as the skill raises higher in tiers the camouflage becomes much better.



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2 Re: Zakad the Bear dog on 13/12/16, 10:25 am

You havent put the image for the beast
Change the 6'6" to use metric measurement in meter or centimeter
Give more words for the beast description, like how wide is it, is it furry or not, color of the eyes and those kind of stuffs.



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3 Re: Zakad the Bear dog on 02/02/17, 06:05 am

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4 Re: Zakad the Bear dog on 02/02/17, 10:58 am

The description seems unfinished and you're missing an image. I feel like the trait could also be worded a lot better / more efficiently.

Since there isn't a D Tier camouflage value, perhaps this lower tier trait would require Zakad to stay still while camouflaging and in a certain environment. If someone saw Zakad camouflaging, they would see him. I'm basing these suggestions off of how camouflage for Ranger's work.

Other than that, this was good. :D


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