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1 Re: Aerelys on 07/12/16, 05:03 pm

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Lernaean:
You can't just have resistance to water magic just because your beast lived in water. Also, based on your description, the effect should be something like "can breath underwater and on land" because nowhere does it explain any sort of resistances.

Hydra Psychosocial:
If you want poison, that's a trait. If you want the ability to produce water, that's a trait. You can't just bundle them together into one trait.

Also, the description would need to be more clear about how exactly the beast has control over water in order to make water abilities. The only description you provided is that it covers itself in water. How? Why? That doesn't sound like a bodily function very useful for making abilities through.


Cold Blooded:
Specify D-tier cold


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2 Re: Aerelys on 07/12/16, 08:29 pm

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Made Edits to the corresponding traits~


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3 Re: Aerelys on 07/12/16, 09:17 pm

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Okay, when you go ahead and edit something differently from what I told you to edit it to, I'd really appreciate some kind of explanation as to why you ignored what I said.

I'm very open to you finding solutions other than the ones I give. For Cold Blooded it seems like you've gone with an immunity to frostbite status effects instead of D-tier cold resistance. Meaning you have no resistance to cold damage, only resistance to that status effect.

But you still mention cold resistance, so I'm not 100% sure and because you gave no explanation as to why you didn't edit it to specify D-tier damage resistance I can't approve it as there is no justification from your part as to why you edited it differently.

I apologize if this sounds condescending or mean. That isn't my intent. But I'm saying all this to express my exasperation. You already disregarded my advice to simply wait till you had beast tamer to go registering your next beast. You disregarded what I said about your freezing blood trait and added freezing touch. Now you're disregarding the grading I gave you.

I'm at a loss at how to handle this because it appears that you aren't even reading the words I type out to you.


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4 Re: Aerelys on 07/12/16, 10:10 pm

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Bump, with the edits talked about in the c-box.o-o


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5 Re: Aerelys on 08/12/16, 08:28 pm

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Approved and priced at 20k huang. But you must wait till you have the appropriate class to purchase this.


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