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Hannah Voight [Done] Gudako.240.2053053
Name: Hannah Voight
Country Affiliation: Kou
Race: Magician
Tier: D Tier
Class: Magician (5th Wind)
Age + Birthdate: 14 years old April 16th
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Personality:
Being a young teenage girl in the big world Hannah is rather quirky. She has always shown a rather large heart when it comes to other humans, animals, and in some regard to other races. She has left her family nearly three years ago to study magic so she often misses them and writes letters to home to tell her about her studies and adventures. As a teenage girl her appearance is rather important to her, she spares no expense when it comes to her cosmetics.
Hannah is though extremely shy when she is around others that are similar to her age, her words seem to stumble, her heart flatters, and she becomes a klutz. Perhaps it is since she has an innate drive to be liked and popular that she gets into her own head and psyches herself out. She is rather comfortable with older people though, mainly because she has always been complimented on her cuteness and blooming skill with magic.
Being from Kou Hannah is not one to shy away from combat. She has often stepped up when it came to spars in her school. While her magic is not entirely focused on doing damage it is extremely creative, something she prides herself for. She is always reading new and exciting ways to utilize her magic and further aid her nation.

Likes:
Books- Can learn so many things by just reading a few pages
Fireflies- reminds her of perfect summer nights spent with her mother and father
First Snow of the year- just seems like a magical time to her, call it a child’s whim
Sweets- She has a sweet tooth like no other
Cats- They’re just so fluffy and sweet, she grew up with three cats in her home
Dislikes:
Mushrooms- The earthy of a taste, not her style
Reptiles- They are so slimy and gross
Insects- Creepy crawlies that have way too many legs
Sickness- There has been a slew of sickness and deaths in Hannah’s hometown making her wary
Babies- She really does not have a tolerance for small screaming people
Aspirations:
-Learn as many types of magic as possible. She knows that this will take a long time but learning more magic will allow her to create new different ways to utilize it!
-She wants to become a magician of the Kou court. As a magician of the court she will never have to worry about found or money ever again.
-She hopes to find a cure for her father or be able to give him the money he needs to continue buying the medication that he needs to live.
Phobias/fears:
-Complete darkness makes her rather uncomfortable, this stems from a common childhood fear. While she is not going to cry without a nightlight she does prefer to have a candle or two illuminating her room.
-Snakes are slithery, sneaky, and potentially deadly. She tries her best to avoid them at all cost. On multiple occasions a snake has touched her and she has either fainted or screamed to the point that her voice has gone out.
-While she wants to travel she has no desire to be out on open water for  prolonged time. She would rather take a land route than by sea if she could.
Face-Claim:  Gudako || Fate Grand Order
Hair Color: Orange
Eye Color: Amber
Height: 142 cm
Weight: 34.47 kg
Appearance:
Hannah normally is seen wearing a white robe that falls right above her knees. If she is not wearing this outfit you can find her wearing more common clothing like a simple medium length skirt and blouse. Her hair isn’t normally done but just pulled back by a ponytail or hairpin. She is very vain in some aspects, if she has any kind of blemish she will use some rather expensive makeup products. While in battle she may appear timid and meek, while this may be true in some if not most instances she is reality not the type to back down and will hold her ground showing a look of determination and reliance.

Rukh Alignment: White
Special Features: N/A
History:
Hannah was born of two immigrants that both hailed from different countries that no longer exist in today’s world after they both went through wars. Her father was not magically apt but a crafty man, he ended up learning the art of blacksmithing while her mother was the opposite, she was rather useful when it came to magical talents. Her mother was Hannah’s first real teacher, her magic leaned more towards the 5th magic type, life. She always kept a lovely garden, full of bright and exotic flowers; Hannah would spend hours and hours sitting under one of her mother’s cherry blossom trees reading children’s books, color pictures of her family, and making crowns out of the flowers found in the garden, typical young girl activities.

When her magical talents started to bloom and show signs of the 5th magic type her parents sat Hannah down and explained to her that she was to be sent to a school in a distant down to learn the basics of the magic. While they promised to write to her daily they would not be able to afford to come there often or bring her home. So at the age of 10 years old she was shipped out to the opposite side of the nation to go to a rather prestigious magic school within the country’s borders. She was rather shy at the start of the move but slowly opened and found a few close friends.

Hannah studied at the school for four years before she was given her very own staff and white robe to signify her status as a “white mage” also known as one that is apt with the 5th magic type. She has since returned home for the first time in four years to find out that her father had been hiding an illness that he had be shouldering for three years. It was one of the reasons that they were unable to bring Hannah home or go see her ever. He has been unable to work for the past few years and has been growing weaker and weaker each month. Her mother has been able to stabilize him for now but he needs costly medicine and a procedure. Since then Hannah has promised her father that she will go out and become a grand magician to afford the medication and possibly even find a cure for him.


Role-Play Sample:

The sun was beginning to set casting a long shadow across the grassy hill and the fireflies were popping up across the landscape. Several trees dotted the area and underneath one was a single slim figure leaning against the tree began to stir. The figure closed a book that sat on its lap as it stood up stretching. The late summer sun’s rays caught a fiery orange-red hair and an amber tinted eyes. A second figure, much smaller one, popped up stretched its four legs. The first figure turned around to the second and patted the small creature’s head before a soft, sweet, and feminine voice spoke. “Come on, I think its about time we head back to school, I’m ready to grab some dinner. How about you Jinx?” The second looked up to the female and let out a faint meow along and bounced off down the hill jumping from firefly to firefly in a playful manner. It was nearing the end of summer and it would be months before Jinx would get a good play in. It were these moments that made Hannah not so sad to be far away from her parents.



Last edited by hannah voight on 11/12/16, 10:31 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Hannah Voight [Done] Empty Re: Hannah Voight [Done] 11/12/16, 09:41 pm

Hannah Voight

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Ready to be checked!

3Hannah Voight [Done] Empty Re: Hannah Voight [Done] 11/12/16, 09:47 pm

Diana Corvus

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  • In order to be of the Magician class you also need to be of the Magician race.

  • Phobias / fears must be at least 75 words in length; you have 61.

  • Height and weight must be in centimeters and kilograms. You may put the feet, inches, and pounds in parenthesis though.


Other than that it looks good. Please bump when you're finished changing it. :D

4Hannah Voight [Done] Empty Re: Hannah Voight [Done] 11/12/16, 09:57 pm

Hannah Voight

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Okay everything should be good now, so bumping to be rechecked!

5Hannah Voight [Done] Empty Re: Hannah Voight [Done] 11/12/16, 10:11 pm

Diana Corvus

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Sorry-- Before I accept this-- I missed a few things that you need to change / include.


  • Please specify what Magic Type she is starting out with in the class section.

  • In her history-- it states that she is apt in the 5th Magic Type ( Wind ) but developed the 3rd Magic Type when she was a baby. Your character can't know two magic types as a D tier so I would suggest changing that out.

6Hannah Voight [Done] Empty Re: Hannah Voight [Done] 11/12/16, 10:33 pm

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Fixed! Sorry was originally going to go with 3rd but opted for 5th at the last min!

7Hannah Voight [Done] Empty Re: Hannah Voight [Done] 11/12/16, 10:52 pm

Diana Corvus

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Approved!

Now that you have been accepted, you should go on to creating all the things you'll need. Keep in mind, you may start role playing now but I would suggest getting all the following out of the way before entering any sort of combat:

  • Create your vault! Everyone on the forum is required to make a vault. It is something that you manage personally to keep track of your character's development and belongings. The forum you post this in is located under The Room of Fortitude [Creation Center] > Vault. The link to the template is here.

  • Create your starter weapon! Since you're a Magician-- you'll want to create a wand / staff. The forum you post this in is located under The Bazaar [OOC Shop] > Merchant's Alley > Old Wizard's Arcane Shop > Staff Creation. The link to the template is here.

  • Create your starter abilities and traits! The forum you post this in is located under Room of Fortitude [Creation Center] > Abilities/Traits. The link to the template is here. Keep in mind you start out with 2 trait points. Also, when creating starter abilities-- you will create 4 D tier and 1 C tier.

  • If you have any questions, comments, or concerns-- please don't hesitate to message me. I'll be more than happy to help you out the best I can. Thank you for joining us and I hope you enjoy everything the site has to offer!

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[b]Name:[/b] Hannah Voight
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Kou
[b]Race:[/b] Magician
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] 14 years old April 16th
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Sexuality:[/b] Straight
[b]Personality:[/b]
Being a young teenage girl in the big world Hannah is rather quirky. She has always shown a rather large heart when it comes to other humans, animals, and in some regard to other races. She has left her family nearly three years ago to study magic so she often misses them and writes letters to home to tell her about her studies and adventures. As a teenage girl her appearance is rather important to her, she spares no expense when it comes to her cosmetics.
Hannah is though extremely shy when she is around others that are similar to her age, her words seem to stumble, her heart flatters, and she becomes a klutz. Perhaps it is since she has an innate drive to be liked and popular that she gets into her own head and psyches herself out. She is rather comfortable with older people though, mainly because she has always been complimented on her cuteness and blooming skill with magic.
Being from Kou Hannah is not one to shy away from combat. She has often stepped up when it came to spars in her school. While her magic is not entirely focused on doing damage it is extremely creative, something she prides herself for. She is always reading new and exciting ways to utilize her magic and further aid her nation.

[b]Likes:[/b]
Books- Can learn so many things by just reading a few pages
Fireflies- reminds her of perfect summer nights spent with her mother and father
First Snow of the year- just seems like a magical time to her, call it a child’s whim
Sweets- She has a sweet tooth like no other
Cats- They’re just so fluffy and sweet, she grew up with three cats in her home
[b]Dislikes:[/b]
Mushrooms- The earthy of a taste, not her style
Reptiles- They are so slimy and gross
Insects- Creepy crawlies that have way too many legs
Sickness- There has been a slew of sickness and deaths in Hannah’s hometown making her wary
Babies- She really does not have a tolerance for small screaming people
[b]Aspirations:[/b]
-Learn as many types of magic as possible. She knows that this will take a long time but learning more magic will allow her to create new different ways to utilize it!
-She wants to become a magician of the Kou court. As a magician of the court she will never have to worry about found or money ever again.
-She hopes to find a cure for her father or be able to give him the money he needs to continue buying the medication that he needs to live.
[b]Phobias/fears:[/b]
-Complete darkness makes her rather uncomfortable, this stems from a common childhood fear. While she is not going to cry without a nightlight she does prefer to have a candle or two illuminating her room.
-Snakes are slithery, sneaky, and potentially deadly. She tries her best to avoid them at all cost. On multiple occasions a snake has touched her and she has either fainted or screamed to the point that her voice has gone out.
-While she wants to travel she has no desire to be out on open water for  prolonged time. She would rather take a land route than by sea if she could.
[b]Face-Claim:[/b]  Gudako || Fate Grand Order
[b]Hair Color:[/b] Orange
[b]Eye Color:[/b] Amber
[b]Height:[/b] 142 cm
[b]Weight:[/b] 34.47 kg
[b]Appearance:[/b]
Hannah normally is seen wearing a white robe that falls right above her knees. If she is not wearing this outfit you can find her wearing more common clothing like a simple medium length skirt and blouse. Her hair isn’t normally done but just pulled back by a ponytail or hairpin. She is very vain in some aspects, if she has any kind of blemish she will use some rather expensive makeup products. While in battle she may appear timid and meek, while this may be true in some if not most instances she is reality not the type to back down and will hold her ground showing a look of determination and reliance.

[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] White
[b]Special Features:[/b] N/A
[b]History:[/b]
Hannah was born of two immigrants that both hailed from different countries that no longer exist in today’s world after they both went through wars. Her father was not magically apt but a crafty man, he ended up learning the art of blacksmithing while her mother was the opposite, she was rather useful when it came to magical talents. Her mother was Hannah’s first real teacher, her magic leaned more towards the 5th magic type, life. She always kept a lovely garden, full of bright and exotic flowers; Hannah would spend hours and hours sitting under one of her mother’s cherry blossom trees reading children’s books, color pictures of her family, and making crowns out of the flowers found in the garden, typical young girl activities.

When her magical talents started to bloom and show signs of the 3rd  magic type her parents sat Hannah down and explained to her that she was to be sent to a school in a distant down to learn the basics of the magic. While they promised to write to her daily they would not be able to afford to come there often or bring her home. So at the age of 10 years old she was shipped out to the opposite side of the nation to go to a rather prestigious magic school within the country’s borders. She was rather shy at the start of the move but slowly opened and found a few close friends.

Hannah studied at the school for four years before she was given her very own staff and white robe to signify her status as a “white mage” also known as one that is apt with the 5th magic type. She has since returned home for the first time in four years to find out that her father had been hiding an illness that he had be shouldering for three years. It was one of the reasons that they were unable to bring Hannah home or go see her ever. He has been unable to work for the past few years and has been growing weaker and weaker each month. Her mother has been able to stabilize him for now but he needs costly medicine and a procedure. Since then Hannah has promised her father that she will go out and become a grand magician to afford the medication and possibly even find a cure for him.


[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]

The sun was beginning to set casting a long shadow across the grassy hill and the fireflies were popping up across the landscape. Several trees dotted the area and underneath one was a single slim figure leaning against the tree began to stir. The figure closed a book that sat on its lap as it stood up stretching. The late summer sun’s rays caught a fiery orange-red hair and an amber tinted eyes. A second figure, much smaller one, popped up stretched its four legs. The first figure turned around to the second and patted the small creature’s head before a soft, sweet, and feminine voice spoke. [color=orange] “Come on, I think its about time we head back to school, I’m ready to grab some dinner. How about you Jinx?”[/color] The second looked up to the female and let out a faint meow along and bounced off down the hill jumping from firefly to firefly in a playful manner. It was nearing the end of summer and it would be months before Jinx would get a good play in. It were these moments that made Hannah not so sad to be far away from her parents.

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