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1Lagi's A rank Re-submission  Empty Lagi's A rank Re-submission 02/11/16, 11:26 am

Lagi

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Name: Cell Repair
Cell Repair
Tier: A-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Type: supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie must not be expanding outside of Lagi's body
Scaling: Medic: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal damage 1 rank higher than this ability.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

    Orie can heal Lagi's main body of A rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.


Name: Lightning God Blast
Lightning God Blast
Tier: A-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Element: Lightning
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie appears behind lagi and holds out her hand to fire the blast.
Scaling: Annihilate - for 10 more stamina, this ability can do one tier higher in damage.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

    Orie forms and fires off a small 1 meter cube of Lightning magic, traveling up to 40 meters. This cube explodes in a 25 meter diameter sphere when it makes contact with a target or at will, dealing A-Tier damage in the form of 3rd degree burns.


Name: Full Paralyzing
Full Paralyzing
Tier: A-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Element: Lightning
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie appears behind lagi and holds out her hand to fire the blast.
Scaling: Cripple- for 10 more stamina, this ability paralyzing effect is double the original value of how long the inflicted would be paralyzed.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

    Orie can fire out one small 1 meter cube of Lightning magic that's formed and travels as far as 40 meters. The cubes explode, firing off a immense electrical charge from 25 meters from where it lands, makes contact with, or at will. this charge causes full body paralyze for 4 posts and reduces the speed of the opponent to 0. If sustained, Orie can either use the lingering charge signature of where it last landed to recreate the charge explosion in that area once more, or fire it again. Being hit by this move one again resets the paralysis post count.



Name: Lightning Tractor
Lightning Tractor
Tier: A-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie)
Element: Lightning
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie appears behind lagi and holds out her hand to fire the blast.
Scaling: Elongate- The range of the tractor is doubled for 10 more stamina.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

    Orie fires out an amazing blast of lighting magic in the shape of a cone that's 50 meters in length, height and width, and travels as far as 50 meters, dealing A tier lightning damage. When sustained, Orie can fire it again or move the cone around like a tractor beam.



Name: HOLY WUBSTORM!
HOLY WUBSTORM!
Tier: A-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie) and Body Manipulation
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie grows out two long cylinder like whips around Lagi's arms in order to support high intense rotations.

Scaling: Vacuum- For 10 more stamina, the cyclones can actually pull people into the attack if they lack A rank strength to root themselves in.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

    A combination of treating Goop extensions as apart of lagis body and using it as a combo with his body manipulation to create an offensive attack. Lagi extends both arms with Orie's covering to 12.5 meters and twists them at high speeds. After reaching their peak, his arms become a pair of cyclones with each arm 12.5 meters in scale. Each cyclone is capable of B rank damage. Lagi can choose to sustain the cyclones the next post.


Name: Vanishing Drive
Vanishing Drive
Tier: A-Tier
Class:Stealth
Type:Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Both feet must be touching a solid surface

Scaling: Vanish- for 10 more stamina, lagi can leave an after image in his place to feign that he hasn't moved at all.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

    With current form of movement at Lagi's disposal, he uses his stealth tactics practically vanish in a burst of speed of and appear as far as 12 meters of his current location. his technique is quite effective in quick escapes or getting in close for the kill. This is considered a dash or a jump, and can be used to walk on water. IT is equivalent to the A rank fanalis ability of fast movement.


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Duquin

Duquin
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Cell Repair Approved:
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[b]Name:[/b] Cell Repair
[center][b]Cell Repair[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie)
[b]Type:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie must not be expanding outside of Lagi's body
[b]Scaling:[/b] Medic: For 10 more stamina, Orie can heal damage 1 rank higher than this ability.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Orie can heal Lagi's main body of A rank damage over three posts. The symbiotic can assist, assimilate, and accelerate the body's natural healing process.[/list]


Vanishing Drive:

Scaling - You can't leave after images.

Description - You can't just magically disappear, nor can you reach speeds so high that you vanish from sight. If you want to disappear from sight, you need to perform some kind of gimmick to make that possible. For example, Zafar has a skill to "disappear" by shooting a card to block an opponent's eyesight before making a swift movement out of their line of sight.





A for the other abilities, they should be registered to the magic item form of Orie.


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Thank you all, for everything.

Lagi

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Name:  Vanishing Drive
Vanishing Drive
Tier: A-Tier
Class:Stealth
Type:Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Both feet must be touching a solid surface

Scaling:
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

    With current form of movement at Lagi's disposal, he uses his stealth tactics  practically zoom in a burst of speed of  and appear  as far as 12 meters of his current location.  his technique is quite effective in quick escapes or getting in close for the kill. This is considered a dash or a jump, and can be used to walk on water. It is equivalent to the A rank fanalis ability of fast movement.


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Duquin

Duquin
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Vanishing Drive:

-This still implies that you vanish. Instead of just deleting select words please rewrite this entirely.


Holy Wubstorm:

-How are both arms able to fit together without grinding into each other when each one is 12.5m in diameter? Your body isn't even a single meter wide.


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Thank you all, for everything.

Lagi

Lagi
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Name: HOLY WUBSTORM!
Tier: A-Tier
Class: Beast Tamer (Orie) and Body Manipulation
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie grows out two long cylinder like whips around Lagi's arm in order to support high intense rotations. Lagi cannot be holding anything in his hand to use this technique.

Scaling: Multi- If the person makes direct contact with the cyclone, for 10 more stamina, the attack does a second set of A-tier damage.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

A combination of treating Goop extensions as a part of lagis body and using it as a combo with his body manipulation to create an offensive attack. Lagi extends his arm with Orie's covering to 2 meters in width and 20 meters in length and twists it at high speeds. After reaching their peak, his arm become a powerful mini cyclone. The cyclone is capable of A rank damage. Lagi can choose to sustain the cyclone  for the next post.

Name: Initial Drive
Tier: A-Tier
Class: Stealth
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Both feet must be touching a solid surface

Scaling: Travellers Key- for 10 more stamina, lagi can increasedistance of the initial drive by 5. It can also be combined with his natural speed.  Lagi needs a running head start to use initial drive.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 40 Stamina
Description:

With current form of movement at Lagi's disposal, he uses his stealth tactics practically vanish in a burst of speed of and appear as far as 12 meters of his current location. his technique is quite effective in quick escapes or getting in close for the kill. This is considered a dash or a jump, and can be used to walk on water. It is equivalent to the A rank fanalis ability of fast movement.



Last edited by Lagi on 09/03/17, 07:56 am; edited 3 times in total


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Merrze

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HOLY WUBSTORM: Looks fine for the most part, but with your arms being that big wouldnt they kinda grind into each other.

Initial Drive:
Change the sustain to 5 additional meters per 10 magoi and for requirements maybe add that he needs to get in a position before he can dash, or like run. In order to run on water he would probably need a running start as running on water requires someone to run 30m/s.


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Lagi

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updated and edited


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Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
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HOLY WUBSTORM! - I don't think that kind of scaling is going to work tbh, could you possibly change it to something a bit more normal? Like range, hits, or something like that? Sorry, not trying to nitpick it or anything, I just don't really see that form of scaling being something you can do. u.u Everything else should be just fine though.


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Code:
[b]Name: [/b]HOLY WUBSTORM!
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer (Orie) and Body Manipulation
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie grows out two long cylinder like whips around Lagi's arm in order to support high intense rotations. Lagi cannot be holding anything in his hand to use this technique.

[b]Scaling:[/b] Multi- If the person  makes direct contact with the cyclone, for 10 more stamina, the attack does  a second set of A-tier damage.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

A combination of treating Goop extensions as a part of lagis body and using it as a combo with his body manipulation to create an offensive attack. Lagi extends his arm with Orie's covering to 2 meters in width and 20 meters in length and twists it at high speeds. After reaching their peak, his arm become a powerful mini cyclone. The cyclone is capable of A rank damage. Lagi can choose to sustain the cyclone  for the next post.

[b]Name:[/b] Initial Drive
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Class: [/b]Stealth
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Both feet must be touching a solid surface

[b]Scaling: [/b]Travellers Key- for 10 more stamina, lagi can increasedistance of the initial drive by 5. It can also be combined with his natural speed.  Lagi needs a running head start to use initial drive.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

With current form of movement at Lagi's disposal, he uses his stealth tactics practically vanish in a burst of speed of and appear as far as 12 meters of his current location. his technique is quite effective in quick escapes or getting in close for the kill. This is considered a dash or a jump, and can be used to walk on water. It is equivalent to the A rank fanalis ability of fast movement.


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