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1 Ro's multi-use abilities on 31/08/16, 06:55 pm

Después Schrägstrich
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The body must hang loose
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

    Después Schrägstrich is known as After Slash Cuts is a technique which can be used while sprinting or at least near the opponent. The body is to hang loose as they sent most of their focus on the spots of their targets limbs.  The spear goes towards it opponent  which is capable of cutting about halfway through muscle.


Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires the user to hold the sword or spear at a diagonal angle from their own body.
Scaling: Strength
Sustain: 3
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva known as Milky Spear Slide is used with finesse and timing. The side of the spearhead (or sword) gleams with a dim white light. If timed correctly, the user can move the weapon with a quick, pushing away abilities in order to successfully defend himself. .



Twin Point
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Spear or Sword pointed towards the opponent.
Scaling: -
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:3 posts
Cost:10 Stamina
Description:

    Twin Point is a move of precision. With the spearhead (or sword point) sent to strike specific areas of the opponents limbs dealing D-Tier damage..


Lancia Dopo Dash
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must start off running
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    Lancia Dopo Dash known as Spear After Image is a move of speed and . Tilting over just slightly a little bit as if they were running or already running. After initiating a full sprint, the user finds himself beside his opponent, but just slightly beside them.These movement's allow the user to set up another attack within the opponent's blindspot.



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2 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 31/08/16, 11:09 pm

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General Edits:
The Sustain field should be "0" or "-"

You include your ability info when using them in threads. As you do, you fill out the sustain and cost sections on the ability template to help keep track of magoi/stamina and how many sustains you've used.


Después Schrägstrich:

Requirements - Do you need both hands on your spear or just one? You are running in this ability so needing good footing should be here too.

Description - Adding more attacks in the  description splits the damage. At most this C-tier ability can be split into 2 D-tier attacks.

Using hit scaling or sustains to increase total number of hits is calculated during use in a thread only. Description should only list the ability parameters before those modifiers are applied.


Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva:

Requirements = Diagonal in reference to what?

Scaling - Parry isnt a scaling type. Strength scaling is ideal here imo. It will let you scale the defensive strength up to A-tier.

Description - What type of action is the flourish? A horizontal slap? A fluid catch and push? Be specific.

Also, defensive abilities no longer gain a bonus. This can only block up to D-tier damage(before scaling)


Doku Punto:
Warriors cant cause paralysis effects. This is more an assassin ability.


Lancia Dopo Dash:
This needs to be at least C-tier to work in concept. Because it has a supplementary action(dashing) and an offensive action(attacking). The potency of the ability must be split between these two types. Since D-tier can't be split, the ability doesnt work.

Pick an attack or a dash.

For dashing, I understand its flavor text but "Moving quickly the user finds himself beside his opponent, but just slightly beside them" isnt good wording to use. It sounds like you teleport. Instead, describe how the dash works and its limits. Is it a single kick off the ground? How far do you travel? ETC.


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3 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 01/09/16, 08:30 am

Después Schrägstrich: This does not need good footing because the user can also do this while sliding. It requires a loose body only because the movements my be able to to move without much restraint. It also does not require the user to use both hands, its either or. Everything else is fixed.

Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva: I don't understand where you are seeing I gain a defensive bonus for this and this is just a simple block and push, nothing actually fancy. Fixed

Lancia Dopo Dash: This is much like my first ability, which starts off as a dash and then allows me to attack. It starts of as a run in order to get near the opponent and then allows me to attack from said area. The way it is worded is from the perspective of one looking in one the attack, the users body is moving past the opponents body while initiating attack, thus giving the impression they are near their side.

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4 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 01/09/16, 01:39 pm

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General Edits:

Don't forget to set the sustain count to 0 for all of these!


Después Schrägstrich:
Approved with following edits. Please speak up if you dislike the edits.
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[center][b]Después Schrägstrich[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The body must hang loose. Firm grip on spear in at least one hand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Después Schrägstrich is known as After Slash Cuts is a technique which can be used while sprinting or at least near the opponent. The body is to hang loose as they sent most of their focus on the spots of their targets limbs.  The spear goes towards the opponent in a trust which is capable of dealing C-tier damage.[/list]


Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva:
Same as above
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[center][b]Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires the user to hold the sword or spear at a diagonal angle from their own body.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Strength
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva known as Milky Spear Slide is used with finesse and timing. The side of the spearhead (or sword) gleams with a dim white light. If timed correctly, the user can move the weapon with a quick swipe to push away an incoming attack to the left or right.[/list]


Doku Punto:
This ability is still denied since warrior class doesnt get access to paralysis abilities.

That being said, you could still "paralyze" a limb by dealing enough damage to the muscle or tendon. But that would just be a result of battle damage IC. Not from an ability.


Lancia Dopo Dash:
-The first ability can simply be performed while dashing. It doesn't suggest a dash is part of the ability itself.

-This ability incorporates a dash as part of it though. That is why it is a split Offensive/Supplementary ability. Which means that it needs to be C-tier or higher as the tier potency needs to be split between the dash and the attack.

-I suggest stripping the attack and just keeping the dash. Then you can follow the ability up with an attack seamlessly to get the same effect.

-"Moving quickly the user finds himself beside his opponent, but just slightly beside them"

I understood what your wording was conveying. The reason I say its not satisfactory is the bold part. The wording assumes you travel the distance no matter the conditions. Like it is a given.

What I need is for the wording to describe HOW you are moving. Yes, quickly, but what type of dash is it? What are the mechanics of the movement. Lots of running steps like a sprint? Or a single powerful step? Just to give a couple examples.

-The dash also needs a distance limit for how far you can travel. 3m is plenty for a D-tier ability.


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5 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 01/09/16, 03:54 pm

Bumping due to edits

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6 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 01/09/16, 04:23 pm

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7 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 01/09/16, 04:37 pm

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Twin Point:

There are two attacks in this ability. D-tier damage can't be split so it can only have 1 attack. You can give it "Amount" scaling or use sustains to increase the number of attacks when using the ability. But these are modifiers for after the approval process.


Lancia Dopo Dash:
Approved with following edits.
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[center][b]Lancia Dopo Dash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have stable footing.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lancia Dopo Dash known as Spear After Image is a move of speed and . Tilting over just slightly a little bit as if they were running or already running. After initiating a full sprint, the user travels up to 3m attempting to place himself beside his opponent, just slightly off to one side or the other. The goal is to set up for a follow up attack.[/list]


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8 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 02/09/16, 12:37 am

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9 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 02/09/16, 06:54 am

Twin point approved with following edit
Bump if you re okay with the edits

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[center][b]Twin Point[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Spear or Sword pointed towards the opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b]1 post
[b]Cost:[/b]10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Twin Point is a move of precision. With the spearhead (or sword point) sent to strike specific areas of the opponents limbs dealing D-Tier damage.[/list]


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10 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 02/09/16, 08:35 am

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11 Re: Ro's multi-use abilities on 02/09/16, 08:46 am

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Abilities approved. I will leave this thread open for your final starter. You can make one more D-tier ability.

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[center][b]Después Schrägstrich[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The body must hang loose. Firm grip on spear in at least one hand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Después Schrägstrich is known as After Slash Cuts is a technique which can be used while sprinting or at least near the opponent. The body is to hang loose as they sent most of their focus on the spots of their targets limbs.  The spear goes towards the opponent in a trust which is capable of dealing C-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Requires the user to hold the sword or spear at a diagonal angle from their own body.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Strength
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lechoso Lanza Diapositiva known as Milky Spear Slide is used with finesse and timing. The side of the spearhead (or sword) gleams with a dim white light. If timed correctly, the user can move the weapon with a quick swipe to push away an incoming attack to the left or right.[/list]

[center][b]Lancia Dopo Dash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have stable footing.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Lancia Dopo Dash known as Spear After Image is a move of speed and . Tilting over just slightly a little bit as if they were running or already running. After initiating a full sprint, the user travels up to 3m attempting to place himself beside his opponent, just slightly off to one side or the other. The goal is to set up for a follow up attack.[/list]

[center][b]Twin Point[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Spear or Sword pointed towards the opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b]1 post
[b]Cost:[/b]10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Twin Point is a move of precision. With the spearhead (or sword point) sent to strike specific areas of the opponents limbs dealing D-Tier damage.[/list]


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