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Character Profile - Alexander the Great Rider.%28Alexander%29.full.1928507
Name: Alexander
Country Affiliation: Kou
Race: Fanalis
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Age + Birthdate: 17years - 8th, may.
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality:
Alexander its a real noble man, who always think in everybody, helping all the people in the way is possible, but, don't get me wrong, never see Alexander like a altruist person, because his not. Alexander can be a lovely person who is good with everybody, but behind that helpfull personality exist a man who want be noted, and be the person where everybody its gonna see it and say "i want to be like he".

He has a will inside of him , in be the greatest man alive, and because that Alexander can be a little bit greedy , but , even it with all that will , he are still a person who know, thats gonna be a lot  easier to happen if he stay close of other people . Based on that we can see Alexander like a strong man with strong personality and who know how much friendship is important.

Alexander is a happy man , who know how to get what he want , and have a easier way to be friend of any person , its just a person sociable , and everybody start to like him after a few minutes talking with him.

Alexander want to be remembered like a great man, and to get that dream, he want to dominate all the country, and consequently conquer the world, this shows how greedy he is.

Even it being a man who love fight and want dominate the world through that , Alexander has a emotive side , and know how much painfull it is lost a friend in battle , thats shows the  emotive person who worry a lot with people who are close to him .
Likes:
Food ~ Always want food, it is the kind of person who are ever hungry.

Friendship ~ Its a person who loves have the friends close, and want to take everybody to the glory.
Dislikes:
Death of Friends ~ Like ever person who have a emotive side, Alexander always be afraid to lost any friend, even knowing thats going to happened a lot.

People without willpower ~ Being a person who have a lot willpower, Alexander hate the kind people who have not.
Aspirations:
Alexander Want to be the owner of the world, based on his history, he started his life wanting that, and even it with the time having passed and his being a little old now, he believe now with all his life experience, now he's capable to conquer the world. And with all his willpower he will be capable of being owner of everything, even it the battle to get in there its gonna being very tough.
Phobias/fears:
Amnesifobia ~ The father of Alexander had alzheimer , thats why Alexander have scared start to lose memory.

Ailurofobia ~ Fear of cats (just cats ) . When little, Alexander had a bird , but a cat just eat que bird in front of Alexander and he can not do nothing.

Show Weakness ~ Alexander always being the person happy , and show to everybody his willpower and like to see how people look at he When he show this , but When he is humiliated or just lost his Willpower and show weakness, he just has a lot of scared .
Face-Claim: Iskandar - Fate Zero
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 212 cm
Weight: 130 kg
Appearance:
Is a gigantic man standing over two meters in height. He has large muscles that give the impression of being able to kill a bear with his bare hands. He has sternly chiseled features with eyes that give off a dazzling glow, able to overtake any person soul in an instant with their sharpness, and burning red hair and beard. He wears bronze armor with cuffs and greaves with fringes that leaves his arms and thighs unprotected. He wears a thick mantle, with fringes like his cuffs, dyed in a similar red to his hair. It is luxuriously decorated, and looks like a curtain wrapping the stage of a theater.
Rukh Alignment: White Rukh
Special Features:
Alexander just have a weird conversation with himself, nothing like two personalities, it is just, he talking alone inside his mind.
History:
It was a rainy night When Alexander born, he is a healthy baby, Larger then normal, but still normal fanalis kid, the only trouble it 's the fact of his mother die in the birth, the worst , in the night Alexander born, his dad died too, in the fight against soldiers, but the little Alexander do not remeber that, after all he was just a baby When all this happened . Anyway , after the fights , the soldiers entered the place where the little Alexander crying, and the most curious think happened, in the most of the cases the soldiers will just kill the babes, but one of the soldiers just hide Alexander in a bag , and he led him from that place , and led to Kou Country.

The growing of Alexander it's hard, because of his hair, everybody will just find out he was a Fanalis boy, so he just keeping he entire childhood lock in his house, but onde day when he made seven years old, and his step father do not in the house, Alexander just go out the house and walking in the backyard, it is when he find one kid, and the two just start to play, a time later, a few bad boys just get in there and broken the toys, Alexander mad just punch the kids, everybody around just applauded Alexander, then he see how easier it's receive some glory when he show up his power, and it was just that he made every day, punching the bad boys, but, sadly the soldiers of Kou see Alexander, and arrested him, and take him to the prison, where he never more see his stepfather, and have now his own friend a bird, who later it is killed by a cat.

Alexander passed a couple years in the prison just thinking about the little time he is was off of there, and just start to thinking about conquer the Kou empire and later the all world, and thats dream just came closer when the soldiers of Kou, freedom him, to use Alexander in a fight, and fight after fight Alexander show to everybody how strong he is, and when his finaly know about the Djin Weapons, is when he find out the way to destroy the Kou country and later the all world. Of course in that middle time, Alexander created a will of know more about his family, the Fanalis, and it is this he will find out too, now he have freedom to go whatever he want.
Role-Play Sample:
It is just a lovely day when Alexander wake up over a tree, he opened the eyes a little bit and already can see the light of the sun passing away from the breaches in the tree leaves, after a few minutes just trying to wake more, his just jumps to the ground, put the mantle, and his equip the sword inside the sheath, and let in the left leg. After being totaly prepared to anything who can happen now, Alexander just start to Walk in front line looking for any city.

A few minutes later walking Alexander it just face to face against some kind of wolf(in the forest?), without thinking two times, he just pulls the sword and start to call the animal to the fight, it is when the wolf run in the direction of Alexander and give a jump trying to bite him, but wisely the great fanali warrior hold with the right hand the cable of the sword, and confront the blade against the teeths of the wolf, where in a incredible way nothing happened even it with the wolf and with the blade, then with my left hand call the wolf one more time, and in that time when his coming Alexander just using the tip of the sword try put it inside the wolf mouth.

Obviously he killed the wolf with sucess then his just keeping walking, later Alexander finaly see a huge gate, it was a city, then he just keep in front of the gate, and start to looked the sky and the movement of the clouds, then he just knock the gate and wait to entered the city and later start my real adventure.
PS: Please any word write wrong tell me, i just want to make it better.



Last edited by Ryuzaki Ryuuku on 26/08/16, 10:16 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Unfortunately that Face Claim is already taken by an important Reim NPC: Octavius Flavius.

Please choose a different FC.



Psst...i have a suggestion though Heroic

http://www.zerochan.net/2005865
http://www.zerochan.net/1996018
http://www.zerochan.net/1931776
http://www.zerochan.net/1928507
http://www.zerochan.net/1927486

There are tons of younger versions on this FC online. You'd need to lower the character age and rework the history a bit. But you can keep the FC in an odd way.


In general your english isnt too bad but your execution IS a bit rough. Sadly, I'm not really versed enough to point out all your mistakes. But it is certainly legible text that can be understood!

Very Happy


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Done. And thanks ^^

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Make your vault and starters now Very Happy

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[center][img]http://static.zerochan.net/Rider.%28Alexander%29.full.1928507.jpg[/img][/center]
[b]Name:[/b] Alexander
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Kou
[b]Race:[/b] Fanalis
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] 17years - 8th, may.
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Sexuality:[/b] Heterosexual
[b]Personality:[/b]
[justify]Alexander its a real noble man, who always think in everybody, helping all the people in the way is possible, but, don't get me wrong, never see Alexander like a altruist person, because his not. Alexander can be a lovely person who is good with everybody, but behind that helpfull personality exist a man who want be noted, and be the person where everybody its gonna see it and say "i want to be like he".

He has a will inside of him , in be the greatest man alive, and because that Alexander can be a little bit greedy , but , even it with all that will , he are still a person who know, thats gonna be a lot  easier to happen if he stay close of other people . Based on that we can see Alexander like a strong man with strong personality and who know how much friendship is important.

Alexander is a happy man , who know how to get what he want , and have a easier way to be friend of any person , its just a person sociable , and everybody start to like him after a few minutes talking with him.

Alexander want to be remembered like a great man, and to get that dream, he want to dominate all the country, and consequently conquer the world, this shows how greedy he is.

Even it being a man who love fight and want dominate the world through that , Alexander has a emotive side , and know how much painfull it is lost a friend in battle , thats shows the  emotive person who worry a lot with people who are close to him .[/justify]
[b]Likes:[/b]
[justify][u]Food[/u] ~ Always want food, it is the kind of person who are ever hungry.

[u]Friendship[/u] ~ Its a person who loves have the friends close, and want to take everybody to the glory.[/justify]
[b]Dislikes:[/b]
[justify][u]Death of Friends[/u] ~ Like ever person who have a emotive side, Alexander always be afraid to lost any friend, even knowing thats going to happened a lot.

[u]People without willpower[/u] ~ Being a person who have a lot willpower, Alexander hate the kind people who have not.[/justify]
[b]Aspirations:[/b]
[justify]Alexander Want to be the owner of the world, based on his history, he started his life wanting that, and even it with the time having passed and his being a little old now, he believe now with all his life experience, now he's capable to conquer the world. And with all his willpower he will be capable of being owner of everything, even it the battle to get in there its gonna being very tough.[/justify]
[b]Phobias/fears:[/b]
[justify][u]Amnesifobia[/u] ~ The father of Alexander had alzheimer , thats why Alexander have scared start to lose memory.

[u]Ailurofobia[/u] ~ Fear of cats (just cats ) . When little, Alexander had a bird , but a cat just eat que bird in front of Alexander and he can not do nothing.

[u]Show Weakness[/u] ~ Alexander always being the person happy , and show to everybody his willpower and like to see how people look at he When he show this , but When he is humiliated or just lost his Willpower and show weakness, he just has a lot of scared .[/justify]
[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Iskandar - Fate Zero
[b]Hair Color:[/b] Red
[b]Eye Color:[/b] Brown
[b]Height:[/b] 212 cm
[b]Weight:[/b] 130 kg
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[justify]Is a gigantic man standing over two meters in height. He has large muscles that give the impression of being able to kill a bear with his bare hands. He has sternly chiseled features with eyes that give off a dazzling glow, able to overtake any person soul in an instant with their sharpness, and burning red hair and beard. He wears bronze armor with cuffs and greaves with fringes that leaves his arms and thighs unprotected. He wears a thick mantle, with fringes like his cuffs, dyed in a similar red to his hair. It is luxuriously decorated, and looks like a curtain wrapping the stage of a theater.[/justify]
[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] White Rukh
[b]Special Features:[/b]
[justify]Alexander just have a weird conversation with himself, nothing like two personalities, it is just, he talking alone inside his mind.[/justify]
[b]History:[/b]
[justify]It was a rainy night When Alexander born, he is a healthy baby, Larger then normal, but still normal fanalis kid, the only trouble it 's the fact of his mother die in the birth, the worst , in the night Alexander born, his dad died too, in the fight against soldiers, but the little Alexander do not remeber that, after all he was just a baby When all this happened . Anyway , after the fights , the soldiers entered the place where the little Alexander crying, and the most curious think happened, in the most of the cases the soldiers will just kill the babes, but one of the soldiers just hide Alexander in a bag , and he led him from that place , and led to Kou Country.

The growing of Alexander it's hard, because of his hair, everybody will just find out he was a Fanalis boy, so he just keeping he entire childhood lock in his house, but onde day when he made seven years old, and his step father do not in the house, Alexander just go out the house and walking in the backyard, it is when he find one kid, and the two just start to play, a time later, a few bad boys just get in there and broken the toys, Alexander mad just punch the kids, everybody around just applauded Alexander, then he see how easier it's receive some glory when he show up his power, and it was just that he made every day, punching the bad boys, but, sadly the soldiers of Kou see Alexander, and arrested him, and take him to the prison, where he never more see his stepfather, and have now his own friend a bird, who later it is killed by a cat.

Alexander passed a couple years in the prison just thinking about the little time he is was off of there, and just start to thinking about conquer the Kou empire and later the all world, and thats dream just came closer when the soldiers of Kou, freedom him, to use Alexander in a fight, and fight after fight Alexander show to everybody how strong he is, and when his finaly know about the Djin Weapons, is when he find out the way to destroy the Kou country and later the all world. Of course in that middle time, Alexander created a will of know more about his family, the Fanalis, and it is this he will find out too, now he have freedom to go whatever he want.[/justify]
[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]
[justify]It is just a lovely day when Alexander wake up over a tree, he opened the eyes a little bit and already can see the light of the sun passing away from the breaches in the tree leaves, after a few minutes just trying to wake more, his just jumps to the ground, put the mantle, and his equip the sword inside the sheath, and let in the left leg. After being totaly prepared to anything who can happen now, Alexander just start to Walk in front line looking for any city.

A few minutes later walking Alexander it just face to face against some kind of wolf(in the forest?), without thinking two times, he just pulls the sword and start to call the animal to the fight, it is when the wolf run in the direction of Alexander and give a jump trying to bite him, but wisely the great fanali warrior hold with the right hand the cable of the sword, and confront the blade against the teeths of the wolf, where in a incredible way nothing happened even it with the wolf and with the blade, then with my left hand call the wolf one more time, and in that time when his coming Alexander just using the tip of the sword try put it inside the wolf mouth.

Obviously he killed the wolf with sucess then his just keeping walking, later Alexander finaly see a huge gate, it was a city, then he just keep in front of the gate, and start to looked the sky and the movement of the clouds, then he just knock the gate and wait to entered the city and later start my real adventure.[/justify]
[u][i]PS: Please any word write wrong tell me, i just want to make it better.[/i][/u]


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