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1Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Solomon's Item Resubmits on 01/08/16, 09:41 pm

SolomonxKing

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Here are my resubmits, as for the first two weapons I would like to make the shield into a beast who I have already created below and can post elsewhere if you like. I would also like to just trade green thumb for haung. As for the Journey Book I would like to trade that in for Haung as Hohotaro went inactive almost immediately after purchasing. The reason for the beast would be that I am having my Primary Spec changed to Beast Tamer and my Secondary Spec become Warrior.

Lone Wolf:

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Name: Lone Wolf
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Shield
Material: Onyx and Steel
Appearance: Stands 152.4 cm tall and 100 cm wide has a arm strap attached just next to a handle so if Solomon wishes he could just attach it to his arm so he would not have to hold it.

Omega Trait I will allow you to make?

Beast:

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Name: Mamoru
Tier: A-Tier
Type Legend Beast
Species: Fish/Turtle/Lion
Appearance: 400 cm long and 200 cm tall this beast the golden hair of a lion that originates from his Lion head the rest of it's body covered by shell and the top of its head the scales of a fish.
Traits:

Trait Name: Exceptional Speed
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Genetics
Trait Description: Through excessive training, this Beast has reached a level of speed that exceeds the average Beast.
Trait Effect:The Beast can now move like a blur across short distances and move fast enough to run along walls. They can maintain this speed for hours.

Trait Name: Exceptional Strength
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Genetics .  
Trait Description: Through extensive training with Solomon and Genetics
Trait Effect:The Beast can now bend steel and shatter iron with their body/claws/jaws and deal A-tier damage with their physical strength alone.

Trait Name: Cephalopod Hiding
Trait Tier: B
Trait Requirement: Genetics of a Cephalopod fish
Trait Description: This beast has been in hiding in many years only coming out when he is truly needed or for those poaching on his territories, but when those search for him they have no luck in finding him. I wonder why is that?
Trait Effect:Can Camouflage with his surroundings by changing the colour of its skin and shell to match that of its surroundings. Counting as a B-tier stealth.

Trait Name: Cephalopods Poison
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Genetics
Trait Description: Due the genetic nature of the beast being that of a Cephalopods he can use its poison to easily take down other creatures that discover him.
Trait Effect: This creature is able to add poison to created attacks skills of A-tier and lower.

Trait Name: Carapace of the Sea Deity
Trait Tier: Omega
Trait Requirement: Legend Beast | Mamoru Species  
Trait Description: Folk tales along many coastal villages tell of a great sea god that protects the worthy during times of great calamity. Stories of a powerful lion with a golden shell emerging from the waters depict the beast covering a small home of the faithful, protecting them from tidal waves or even falling stars.
Trait Effect: Mamoru's back, limbs, scalp, and tail are all covered in a thick golden carapace that protects it from all types of damage. This shell will defend against an Omega-tiers worth of damage before breaking. The lower flanks, underbelly, face, and neck are not protected.

Green Thumb:

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Name: Green Thumb
Material: Dark Iron
Appearance: The wand is 45 centimetres long and 2.5 centimetres in diameter. The wand is made out of a dark tinted iron but looks very much light a broken branch, the tip of the wand where it was tipped off looks almost like budding leafs, and Solomon himself would put charms onto the wand and a wrapping of where he would usually hold it. Atop of the wand would be a thin sheet of crytstal that has hardened into the shape of a large leaf, the wand would have a part of a broken dagger attached to the bottom of it, the dagger is inscribed with the words "Puncture the earth and stone, grow unbound to time."

Charm:

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The Alchemist: Allows the person to be unaffected from abilities like poisons, freezes, or paralysis that are caused by abilities or items of their rank or lower, can only negate one ability per thread. This ability can only be used once per thread.

Journey Book -> Hoho:
Name: Journey Book
Type: Notebooks
Magic Type: Communication [Light + Clairvoyance]
Appearance: A set of two leather-bound journals filled with pages.
Function:

  • The two notebooks are linked using a combination of Clairvoyance magic, which communicates the message from one book to the other, and Light magic, which gives the illusion of the other notebook receiving the message. Can be used to communicate over vast distances. Anything written in one book will “appear” in the other book.


*This does not take up any of your item/weapon slots

Heart of the Mountain -->C-Tier:

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Name: Heart of the Mountain
Tier: C
Type: Ring (Magic Tool)
Magic Type: Lava [Heat + Strength]
Appearance: This ring is silver, inlaid with glowing rubies. The face is approximately 1.5 cm tall. The magic circle can be found on the inside of the ring.
Function:

  • Molten Spill – By paying 10 magoi, the user may create a pool of lava 10 meters across at 20 m/s within 20 meters of themselves, inflicting C-tier burn damage to anything caught in the pool. 3 Post Cool-Down
  • Onyx Wall – By paying 10 magoi, the user may create a wall of onyx 5 meters tall and 5 meters wide at 20 m/s within 20 meters of themselves. 3 Post Cool-Down


*This does not take up any of your item/weapon slots

Nature's Embrace -->B-Tier:

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Name: Nature's Embrace
Tier: B
Type: Magic Tool - Bracer
Magic Type: Life Magic
Appearance: The bracer has intricate leather working depicting a tree in fall; bare of any leaves or fruit. A crescent moon is at the head of the tree, and the night sky seems to dominate the background of this leather bracer. On the opposite side a magical circle has been worked into the leather, showing its capability of channeling the user's magoi into spells.
Function:

  • Nature's Nurture: Paying 15 magoi, the user's hand and arm becomes wrapped in the power of Life Magic at 20 m/s. The first 4 individuals who come in contact with this  heals for B-Tier damage over 3 posts (D-Tier healing in the first two posts, with C-Tier healing in the third). Cool-down: 5 posts.
  • Thorn: Paying 15 magoi, the user fires out a thorn that is created from their palm towards a target at 20 m/s. This thorn is 1 meter in length, and 15 cm in width at its center before tapering off to a point. It deals C-Tier damage, and causes immobilization on 2 limbs for 3 posts as sap from it quickly hardens against a struck opponent.

    Name: Nature's Fury
    Tier:B-tier
    Cost: 30/15
    Element: Life Magic
    Class: Offensive
    Range: 30 meters
    Cool-Down: 5 posts
    Description:  Solomon produces 15 meter high growth of trees that move forward and pierce up and down from the ground like spikes. These spikes start at 4 cm in width before reaching a total of 1 meter in width. As these trees move forward, they destroy things in their path, almost like a wave. They discharge in a 15 meter diameter within 30 meters of him at 20 m/s, dealing B-Tier damage. The spikes will then turn into trees when fully emerged and grow and die at a regular rate for trees if actual tree seeds were used, otherwise they will wither away and disappear.

    Name: Nature's Warning
    Tier:B-tier
    Cost: 30/15 Magoi
    Element: Life Magic
    Class: Offensive
    Range: 30 meters
    Cool-Down: 5 posts
    Description: Solomon produces 15 meter high growth of roses and vines that surround him at 20 m/s, almost looking like that of a tower. The thickness being that of 1 meter thick all around him, these vines would have thick thorns that almost look like daggers being 12 cm long. The thorns would then discharge in a 15 meter diameter around himself shooting outwards at a speed of 20 m/s, dealing B-Tier damage. The spikes will then turn into fully bloomed roses and vines would cover the contacted area if Solomon decided to use his seeds at any point within this skill they would grow and die at a regular rate.
  • User may register up to 2 B-Tier Life abilities to this item.


Amulet of Destruction -->A-Tier:

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Name: Amulet of Destruction
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Magic Tool
Magic Type: Meteor Magic [Heat + Strength]
Appearance: This silver magic amulet is 10 centimeters in diameter. A combination of a special jewel and a master painting upon the surface of the object creates a realistic depiction of a large meteor crashing into a planet. The magic circle is engraved upon the bottom side of the metal that directly holds the crystal.
Function:
By paying 20 magoi the user is capable of summoning a pebble that is 10 cm in diameter. It is sent forward at a target at 25 m/s, though can move no further than 40 meters from its casting point. As it moves, it pulls dirt and the like about it into its mass, becoming 10-15 meters in diameter before exploding in a 25 meter diameter area and dealing A-Tier damage to all who are struck by the resulting explosion. A small 5 meter storm of miniature meteors fall about in a 5 meter area, slowing those who pass through it by 5 m/s. 7 post cool-down.

Name: Smite
Tier: A-Tier
Cost: 40|20
Element: Meteor Magic [Heat + Strength]
Class: Offensive
Range: 40 meters
Cool-Down: 7 Posts
Description: A rock would begin to form next to Solomon .5 meters in size at a speed of 25 m/s it would then shoot up into the air at the same speed and comes homing down upon Solomon's choice of target within a range of 40 meters dealing A-Tier and exploding in a 25 meter diameter area and dealing A-Tier damage to all who are struck by the resulting explosion. A small 5 meter storm of miniature meteors fall about in a 5 meter area around the target, slowing those who pass through it by 5 m/s. This ability could then be sustained to then reform the rock at a speed of 25/ms and send it flying towards another target at 25/ms to deal A-tier damage and same effect.

The user may register 1 A-Tier Meteor Magic spell to this item.



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2Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 02/08/16, 06:21 pm

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Duquin
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A-Tier
Beast

Appearance:
Decrease the size of the dimensions by 200cm each.

The Food Chain:
THIS is the iffy one. I'm gonna deny this as it is. But if you add in some reasonable limitations then it could fly. Scaring anything regardless of tier is way too much. But scaring things weaker than you is acceptable. Also, it needs explanation on what intimidation does. Will it force beasts to run away? Will it just make them more cautious? If it's the latter, you do know that would be basically useless in battle right?

Lightning Rod:
Solomon shouldn't even be mentioned here.

There is nothing wrong with a beast have lightning resistance, I don't understand why you think it's iffy. That being said, the level of resistance would be limited to the trait tier( B ).

Omega Trait:
Since this beast is not based on any mythical creatures I'm personally aware of, it is difficult to make an appropriate trait for it considering you've given me no feedback on what it is you want.

What kind of creature is this? What would it's specialty be in nature? What kind of omega trait would you want? Help me help you.




Items

Green Thumb:
Priced at 75k

Cham:
Charms are being phased out. Priced at 50k

Journey Book:
Priced at 60k

Heart of the Mountain:
Here is your new code:
Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Heart of the Mountain
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Ring (Magic Tool)
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Lava [Heat + Strength]
[b]Appearance:[/b] This ring is silver, inlaid with glowing rubies. The face is approximately 1.5 cm tall. The magic circle can be found on the inside of the ring.
[b]Function:[/b]
[list]
[*][b]Onyx Wall[/b] – Feeding magoi into the ring and touching the ground, causes the earth to form a molten strip 5m wide and 30cm thick. A wall of onyx quickly rises from the molten strip becoming 3m tall. The wall can be formed anywhere at any orientation from the earth within 10m of the user. 10 magoi to activate | 5 magoi to sustain.
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Nature's Embrace:
Here is your new code:
Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Nature's Embrace
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Type:[/b] Magic Tool - Bracer
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Life Magic
[b]Appearance:[/b] The bracer has intricate leather working depicting a tree in fall; bare of any leaves or fruit. A crescent moon is at the head of the tree, and the night sky seems to dominate the background of this leather bracer. On the opposite side a magical circle has been worked into the leather, showing its capability of channeling the user's magoi into spells.
[b]Function:[/b]
[list]
[*][b]Embrace of the Forest[/b] - Feeding magoi into the bracer causes roots to spread from the magic tool across the user's body. These roots are only a few centimeters thick and spread to cover any injured limbs. The roots then grow thorns which stab into the injured limb producing sap that stops bleeding and numbs pain for 3 posts from the last sustain. In addition, while the roots are active, the user can control them allowing them to manipulate otherwise crippled limbs. Severing the roots will cancel their effect, but sustaining the tool will allow them to reform right away. The roots do not decrease incoming damage and can catch flame if burned with B-tier or greater fire. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.
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You gain 2 B-tier ability slots which may be applied anywhere.

Amulet of Destruction:
Since offensive magic items are no longer a thing, there are two choices with this. It can be drastically changed into a new A-tier combination magic magic tool, or exchanged for 150k huang. Which would you prefer?




185k huang added to your account.


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3Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 02/08/16, 09:56 pm

SolomonxKing

SolomonxKing
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So took off the things sold in my vault so far, also changed the beast entirely to be more mythical like in hope it helps with omega I would think I would like its speciality to be more of that of a "tank" if that helps or maybe weight like it can't be picked up kinda thing, what ever you think you can make cooler :). As for the Amulet of destruction i would like to change that into something mise-well and as of the b-tier ability slots used "anywhere" does that mean I can just add them to my character as extra ability slots?


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4Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 03/08/16, 06:36 pm

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier
Beast

Omega Trait:
Spoiler:
Trait Name: Carapace of the Sea Deity
Trait Tier: Omega
Trait Requirement: Legend Beast | Mamoru Species
Trait Description: Folk tales along many coastal villages tell of a great sea god that protects the worthy during times of great calamity. Stories of a powerful lion with a golden shell emerging from the waters depict the beast covering a small home of the faithful, protecting them from tidal waves or even falling stars.
Trait Effect: Mamoru's back, limbs, scalp, and tail are all covered in a thick golden carapace that protects it from all types of damage. This shell will defend against an Omega-tiers worth of damage before breaking. The lower flanks, underbelly, face, and neck are not protected.

Code:
[b]Trait Name:[/b] Carapace of the Sea Deity
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Omega
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Legend Beast | Mamoru Species 
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Folk tales along many coastal villages tell of a great sea god that protects the worthy during times of great calamity. Stories of a powerful lion with a golden shell emerging from the waters depict the beast covering a small home of the faithful, protecting them from tidal waves or even falling stars.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Mamoru's back, limbs, scalp, and tail are all covered in a thick golden carapace that protects it from all types of damage. This shell will defend against an Omega-tiers worth of damage before breaking. The lower flanks, underbelly, face, and neck are not protected.

Is this satisfactory?

Fishy Fishy:

Come on, you can do better work than this. The minimal effort put into this trait is what makes it unacceptable.




What does "mise-well" mean? o.o

Also, yes, the abilities become free extra ability slots for your character.


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Thank you all, for everything.

5Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 03/08/16, 07:19 pm

SolomonxKing

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That is more then satisfactory that is great, I have also tried to buff mine up and changing it up with the camouflage trait. And Mise-well is like ehhhhhh. But yes lets turn the A-tier into a usable Item.


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6Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 12/08/16, 06:17 pm

SolomonxKing

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Bump just to notify that I changed a trait on the beast.


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7Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 13/08/16, 02:34 pm

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
Beast's Traits:
Cephalopod Hiding You need to give more details for the camouflage, such as if the skin color change or if you are using your surrounding




Amulet of Construction

Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Amulet of Construction
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Magic Tool
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Foundation Magic [Life + Strength]
[b]Appearance:[/b] This silver magic amulet is 10 centimeters in diameter. A combination of a special jewel and a master painting upon the surface of the object creates a realistic depiction of a planets core. The magic circle is engraved upon the bottom side of the metal that directly holds the crystal.
[b]Function:[/b]
[list][b]Origin Architecture[/b] - By feeding magoi into the magic tool, the user may touch the ground producing a black light that spread across the ground in the 5cm tall wave. The wave covers a 40 meter diameter circle around the user. Within this sphere influence, the user can create reinforce foundation used in the construction large building. Structures made by this ability can be up to 5 stories tall. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.[/list]


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8Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 13/08/16, 02:48 pm

SolomonxKing

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bump


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9Solomon's Item Resubmits Empty Re: Solomon's Item Resubmits on 13/08/16, 02:57 pm

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
Approved with following edits

Code:
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[b]Name:[/b] Mamoru
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type[/b] Legend Beast
[b]Species:[/b] Fish/Turtle/Lion
[b]Appearance:[/b] 400 cm long and 200 cm tall this beast the golden hair of a lion that originates from his Lion head the rest of it's body covered by shell and the top of its head the scales of a fish.
[b]Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Exceptional Speed
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] A
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Genetics
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through excessive training, this Beast has reached a level of speed that exceeds the average Beast.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]The Beast can now move like a blur across short distances and move fast enough to run along walls. They can maintain this speed for hours.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Exceptional Strength
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] A
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Genetics . 
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through extensive training with Solomon and Genetics
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]The Beast can now bend steel and shatter iron with their body/claws/jaws and deal A-tier damage with their physical strength alone.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Cephalopod Hiding
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] B
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Genetics of a Cephalopod fish
[b]Trait Description:[/b] This beast has been in hiding in many years only coming out when he is truly needed or for those poaching on his territories, but when those search for him they have no luck in finding him. I wonder why is that?
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]Can Camouflage with his surroundings by changing the color of its skin and shell to match that of its surroundings. So long as the user is remaining still, they possess B-tier camouflage. Movement doesn't cancel the camouflage, but it does greatly reduce the effectiveness. The user cannot create a camouflage on background with complex patterns and lots of colors.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Cephalopods Poison
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] A
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Genetics
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Due the genetic nature of the beast being that of a Cephalopods he can use its poison to easily take down other creatures that discover him.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] This creature is able to add poison to created attacks skills of A-tier and lower.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Carapace of the Sea Deity
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Omega
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Legend Beast | Mamoru Species 
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Folk tales along many coastal villages tell of a great sea god that protects the worthy during times of great calamity. Stories of a powerful lion with a golden shell emerging from the waters depict the beast covering a small home of the faithful, protecting them from tidal waves or even falling stars.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Mamoru's back, limbs, scalp, and tail are all covered in a thick golden carapace that protects it from all types of damage. This shell will defend against an Omega-tiers worth of damage before breaking. The lower flanks, underbelly, face, and neck are not protected.
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