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1The Gremorian Empty The Gremorian on 29/05/15, 12:06 pm

Name:Gremorian Zenith
Tier:B
Cost: 30/15
Element: Strength
Class: Supplementary
Range: 15 m
Cool-Down: 5 +1 sustained
Description: Jahan creates 1-2 pitch black orbs 1 ft in diameter which float freely as he commands. The orbs emit a complex and powerful wave of gravity in every direction up to 15 m's; effecting those who are not in direct contact with Jahangir. The orbs deal a C tier effect each if 2 are formed, and a B tier effect if one is formed. The orbs are formed at 20 m/s.

Name:Gremorian Zilla
Tier:B
Cost:30/15
Element:strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 15 m
Cool-Down: 5 posts + 1 sustained
Description:Jahan wills the rukh to create a construct of pure strength magic, which envelopes his blade shining a dark black hue. At any point Jahan may propel this destructive force of pure crushing pressure at 20 m/s for B tier damage. The ray of force is 1 meter in width, height and length, the path of its destruction follows the path of Jahangir's blade, and is free to move forward in any direction.


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2The Gremorian Empty Re: The Gremorian on 29/05/15, 01:28 pm

Gremorian Zenith: This doesn't say what it actually DOES to the opponent. Does the gravity push them away or pull them closer? Also, it would not be 15 meters in every direction, as the total scale can only be 15 meters. If it goes in every direction, it would put it at 30 meters at its widest.

Gremorian Zilla: You need to include how far this "force" can travel from Jahan.

Side note: B-tier and higher abilities do not need the "sustain+1" on the cool-down, as you will never be able to sustain a B-tier ability more than 4 posts.


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3The Gremorian Empty Re: The Gremorian on 29/05/15, 02:04 pm

Lol I derped heres the fix

Spoiler:
Name:Gremorian Zenith
Tier:B
Cost: 30/15
Element: Strength
Class: Supplementary
Range: 15 m
Cool-Down: 5
Description: Jahan creates 1-2 pitch black orbs 1 ft in diameter which float freely as he commands. The orbs emit a complex and powerful wave of gravity in every direction up to 7.5 m's; effecting those who are not in direct contact with Jahangir. The orbs deal a C tier immobilization effect each if 2 are formed, and a B tier effect if one is formed. The orbs are formed at 20 m/s.

Name:Gremorian Zilla
Tier:B
Cost:30/15
Element:strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 15 m
Cool-Down: 5 posts + 1 sustained
Description:Jahan wills the rukh to create a construct of pure strength magic, which envelopes his blade shining a dark black hue. At any point Jahan may propel this destructive force of pure crushing pressure at 20 m/s for B tier damage. The ray of force is 1 meter in width, height and length, the path of its destruction follows the path of Jahangir's blade, and is free to move forward in any direction up to 15 m.


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4The Gremorian Empty Re: The Gremorian on 29/05/15, 02:22 pm

Gremorian Zenith: How far can these orbs travel?


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5The Gremorian Empty Re: The Gremorian on 29/05/15, 04:09 pm

Spoiler:
Name:Gremorian Zenith
Tier:B
Cost: 30/15
Element: Strength
Class: Supplementary
Range: 15 m
Cool-Down: 5
Description: Jahan creates 1-2 pitch black orbs 1 ft in diameter which float freely as he commands. The orbs emit a complex and powerful wave of gravity in every direction up to 7.5 m's; effecting those who are not in direct contact with Jahangir. The orbs deal a C tier immobilization effect each if 2 are formed, and a B tier effect if one is formed. The orbs are formed at 20 m/s. The orbs can travel up to 5 meters from Jahangir.


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6The Gremorian Empty Re: The Gremorian on 07/11/15, 01:13 pm

Vardreth

Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
x.x talk about being late to responding to a post. If you do return, keep in mind that we do everything in meters. You would need to change the 'feet' to 'meters'.


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