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1 Amount and Duration Rework- Merrze on 31/03/15, 10:35 pm

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D-tier Abilities

D-tier:

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[b]Name:[/b] Fangir Slash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze slashes at an opponent horizontally at 10 m/s to inflict D-Tier damage.

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[b]Name:[/b] Furious attack
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] sword
[b]Class:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze performs a slash with her blade at 10 m/s to inflict D-tier towards the targets chest.
(This a starter attack which againt the system so I changed it completely if that's okay, it was one of my free moves so I assume it should be good)

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[b]Name:[/b] Curving Parry
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze parries an enemies attack by using the back of her blade and curving it at 10 m/s to redirect up to a C-tier attack.

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[b]Name:[/b] Hunter's Trap
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze stabs her sword into her enemies foot at 10m/s, immobilizing the leg for 2 posts.

C-tier Abilities

C-tier:

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[b]Name:[/b] Fanalis Hurricane
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/supplementary.
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze moves at 10 m/s to circle her opponent, slashing them at 10m/s a total of 2 times to inflict D-tier damage.

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[b]Name:[/b] Breaking force
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10 Sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze lifts her opponent up to slam them down into the ground at 15 m/s, dealing C-Tier damage to her opponent.

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[b]Name:[/b]  Savage Assault
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze grabs her opponent by the back of the head then slams their head to the ground at 15m/s, dealing D-Tier damage and then grinds their face across the ground then tosses them 5 meters.

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[b]Name:[/b] Cross attack.
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword and Elbow
[b]Class:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Duration:[/b] instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze slashes her opponent then slams her left elbow into the cut all at 15 m/s to deal C-tier damage. If any of the attacks miss, only D-tier damage is dealt.

B-tier Abilities

B-tier:

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[b]Name:[/b] Lioness' Rage
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] While close to her enemy Merzze tackles them to the ground then swings her sword a total of 4 times at 20m/s. Each strike deals D-Tier damage.

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[b]Name:[/b] Whirlwind Kick
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] legs
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze spins on her head at 20 m/s performing a series of 4 kicks, each dealing D-Tier damage, on her opponent. If all 4 of the kicks land then B-tier damage is dealt.

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[b]Name:[/b] Rising uppercut (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze uppercuts her opponent at 20m/s with explosive force.

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[b]Name:[/b] Fengir's Blessing
[b]Weapon:[/b] Fengir
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 | 15 sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze places Fengir on the chest of herself or an ally and using life magic it sprouts roots to attach itself to the target and uses healing magic to heal B-tier damage over the course of three posts.

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[b]Name:[/b] Guardian Block (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Arms
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze puts her arms up at 20 m/s blocking up to A-tier damage. She can keep her arms up and sustain the block.

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[b]Name:[/b] Fist Of The Giant (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b]  Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 15m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze slams her fist into the ground at 20m/s creating a shockwave starting .3m away from her, extending out to a 15 meter diameter around her, dealing B-tier damage. She can sustain this by punching the ground again to create another shockwave.

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[b]Name:[/b] Dragon Slice (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze turns around at 20m/s slashing her opponent with her sword dealing B-tier damage. She can sustain this ability by spinning and slicing again.

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[b]Name:[/b] Ferocious Punch (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze strikes her opponent in the chest at 20m/s doing B-tier damage. She can sustain this ability by punching them again in the next post.

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[b]Name:[/b] Eagle Jab (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze jabs her opponent in the face at 20m/s causing her opponent to be dazed and doubling their reaction time for 3 posts.

A-tier Abilities

A-tier:

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[b]Name:[/b] Savage Soul (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 l 20 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Hands (Magoi Manipulation)
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 posts  
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze focuses her magoi then spreads it to her hands and manifests it in the shape of claws in her hands. This allows her to attack with A-tier damage for as long as the ability is sustained.

Beast Abilities

Beast Abilities:

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[b]Name:[/b] Elastic Tongue
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 15 (Half-Cost ability) | 15
[b]Role:[/b]Assassin
[b]Range:[/b] 15m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts +1 sustained
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy shoots his tongue out to 5 meters at 20m/s doing C-tier damage, this can be sustained.

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[b]Name:[/b] Roaring Inferno
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15  sustained
[b]Role:[/b] Assassin
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy shoots a ball of fire 7m in diameter at 25m/s a second dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.

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[b]Name:[/b] Scorching Chomp
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Role:[/b] Brute
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b]  5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy fills his mouth with fire then bites his opponent at 20m/s dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.

Name: Shocking Wrath
Tier: B
Cost: 30 | 15 sustained
Element: Lightning
Class: Offensive
Range: 30m
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Merrze shoots electricity in the shape of wolf's head, which is 5m in diameter at a target within 30 meters at 20m/s. When it hits a target or stops, it explodes dealing B-tier damage to anything within a 15m diameter.



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Lioness' Rage: Since the Offensive effect is at C-tier, then the amount would be maximized at C-Tier. This means that each strike would deal D-Tier damage.

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[b]Name:[/b] Lioness' Rage
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] While close to her enemy Merzze tackles them to the ground then swings her sword a total of 4 times at 20m/s. Each strike deals D-Tier damage.


Whirlwind Kick: Each attack deals D-Tier damage. This means that if 3 attacks land, it deals 1 C-Tier and 1 D-Tier damage. The following wording would be best:

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[b]Name:[/b] Whirlwind Kick
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] legs
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze spins on her head at 20 m/s performing a series of 4 kicks, each dealing D-Tier damage, on her opponent. If all 4 of the kicks land then B-tier damage is dealt.


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Fixed Captain, is there anything else?


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22,000 Huang added to your monies bag~

A couple of your abilities still had 'duration' in it, but I removed it. Use the below abilities:


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[center][u][b][size=13]D-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="D-tier"]
[code][b]Name:[/b] Fangir Slash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze slashes at an opponent horizontally at 10 m/s to inflict D-Tier damage.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Furious attack
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] sword
[b]Class:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze performs a slash with her blade at 10 m/s to inflict D-tier towards the targets chest.[/code]
(This a starter attack which againt the system so I changed it completely if that's okay, it was one of my free moves so I assume it should be good)

[code][b]Name:[/b] Curving Parry
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze parries an enemies attack by using the back of her blade and curving it at 10 m/s to redirect up to a C-tier attack.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Hunter's Trap
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze stabs her sword into her enemies foot at 10m/s, immobilizing the leg for 2 posts.[/code]
[/spoiler]

[center][u][b][size=13]C-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="C-tier"]
[code][b]Name:[/b] Fanalis Hurricane
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/supplementary.
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 turns + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze moves at 10 m/s to circle her opponent, slashing them at 10m/s a total of 2 times to inflict D-tier damage.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Breaking force
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10 Sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze lifts her opponent up to slam them down into the ground at 15 m/s, dealing C-Tier damage to her opponent.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b]  Savage Assault
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze grabs her opponent by the back of the head then slams their head to the ground at 15m/s, dealing D-Tier damage and then grinds their face across the ground then tosses them 5 meters.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Cross attack.
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword and Elbow
[b]Class:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts + 1 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze slashes her opponent then slams her left elbow into the cut all at 15 m/s to deal C-tier damage. If any of the attacks miss, only D-tier damage is dealt.[/code]
[/spoiler]

[center][u][b][size=13]B-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="B-tier"]
[code][b]Name:[/b] Lioness' Rage
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] While close to her enemy Merzze tackles them to the ground then swings her sword a total of 4 times at 20m/s. Each strike deals D-Tier damage.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Whirlwind Kick
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] legs
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze spins on her head at 20 m/s performing a series of 4 kicks, each dealing D-Tier damage, on her opponent. If all 4 of the kicks land then B-tier damage is dealt.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Rising uppercut (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze uppercuts her opponent at 20m/s with explosive force.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Fengir's Blessing
[b]Weapon:[/b] Fengir
[b]Tier:[/b]B
[b]Cost:[/b]30 | 15 sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze places Fengir on the chest of herself or an ally and using life magic it sprouts roots to attach itself to the target and uses healing magic to heal B-tier damage over the course of three posts.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Guardian Block (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Arms
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]Merrze puts her arms up at 20 m/s blocking up to A-tier damage. She can keep her arms up and sustain the block.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Fist Of The Giant (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b]  Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 15m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze slams her fist into the ground at 20m/s creating a shockwave starting .3m away from her, extending out to a 15 meter diameter around her, dealing B-tier damage. She can sustain this by punching the ground again to create another shockwave.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Dragon Slice (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze turns around at 20m/s slashing her opponent with her sword dealing B-tier damage. She can sustain this ability by spinning and slicing again.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Ferocious Punch (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze strikes her opponent in the chest at 20m/s doing B-tier damage. She can sustain this ability by punching them again in the next post.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Eagle Jab (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze jabs her opponent in the face at 20m/s causing her opponent to be dazed and doubling their reaction time for 3 posts.[/code]
[/spoiler]

[center][u][b][size=13]A-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="A-tier"]
[code][b]Name:[/b] Savage Soul (Miathios Style)
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 l 20 sustained
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Hands (Magoi Manipulation)
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 posts  
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze focuses her magoi then spreads it to her hands and manifests it in the shape of claws in her hands. This allows her to attack with A-tier damage for as long as the ability is sustained.[/code]
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[center][u][b][size=13]Beast Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center]

[spoiler="Beast Abilities"]
[code][b]Name:[/b] Elastic Tongue
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 15 (Half-Cost ability) | 15
[b]Role:[/b]Assassin
[b]Range:[/b] 15m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts +1 sustained
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy shoots his tongue out to 5 meters at 20m/s doing C-tier damage, this can be sustained.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Roaring Inferno
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15  sustained
[b]Role:[/b] Assassin
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy shoots a ball of fire 7m in diameter at 25m/s a second dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.[/code]

[code][b]Name:[/b] Scorching Chomp
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Role:[/b] Brute
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b]  5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fluffy fills his mouth with fire then bites his opponent at 20m/s dealing B-tier damage in the form of burns. This ability may be sustained.[/code]
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[b]Name:[/b] Shocking Wrath
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 | 15 sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Merrze shoots electricity in the shape of wolf's head, which is 5m in diameter at a target within 30 meters at 20m/s. When it hits a target or stops, it explodes dealing B-tier damage to anything within a 15m diameter.


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