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1 Summer Forestanna 5[Beast Skills] on 08/02/15, 02:11 pm

Name: Slap Away
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Uses Black Bone hand to slap away[parry] up to 1 C-tier attack.

Name: Beast Grapple
Tier: B
Cost: 30
Beast Type: Brute
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description:Summer moves at 20 m/s to pin her TARGET into the ground by putting her knee on their back and pushing down, immobilizing 3 of their limbs for 3 posts.

Name: Arm Block
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10
Beast Type: Brute
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 3posts or Sustain+1
Description: Summer thrusts both forearms together to block up to B-tier damage. Can be sustained to perform Arm Block during the next post.

Name: Barrel Roll
Tier: D
Cost: 10/5
Beast Type: Brute
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 2posts or Sustain+1
Description: Spinning at 10 m/s, Summer moves 5 meters in a direction of her choosing.

Name: Trembling Headbutt
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15
Beast Type: Brute
Class: Defensive
Range: close
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description:Summer moves at 20m/s to use a defensive headbutt with enough force to stop up to A rank Damage. Can be sustained to perform Trembling Headbutt during the next post.



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Slap Away: Range would be "close"

Right Hook: Only legend beasts can utilize magic. Your beast can use Strength techniques, not Strength Magic techs.

Arm Block: Range would be "close". If it is sustain, duration needs to state "sustain" and cool-down needs to specify "3 posts or sustain+1" Consider rewording the description as follows:

Summer thrusts both forearms together to block up to B-tier damage. Can be sustained to perform Arm Block during the next post.


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Bump , modified what was needed removed right hook and added 3 more


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Beast Grapple: Strength is not a weapon type. Class would not be offensive. Range would be close. Duration would be instant, 1 post or sustained. No speed is listed. Consider rewording the description to:
Summer moves at 20 m/s to pins her target into the ground by putting her knee on their back and pushing down, immobilizing 3 of their limbs for 3 posts.

Barrel Roll: Weapon would be body. Just to clarify, was this supposed to be an ability Bianca uses or Summer? Consider rewording to:
Spinning at 10 m/s, the user moves 5 meters in a direction of their choosing.

Beast Defensive: Due to Summer not having the ability to manipulate her body like that, she would be limited to blocking whatever she can block with her body.

As a side note, this also means your Active will need to be reworded, as she cannot create a "circle" of bone. She could use her arms or her body to block the damage, but she cannot extend her arms beyond their normal range.


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Bump, Em reworded the beast defensive thing, if i am allowed to use that.... i will use the same methord for my active.

Somewhat like a roar but obviously my beast has no mouth so it can't roar.


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That would be considered sound magic, so cant do that


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Bump


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Ariella wrote:Beast Grapple: Strength is not a weapon type. Class would not be offensive. Range would be close. Duration would be instant, 1 post or sustained. No speed is listed. Consider rewording the description to:
Summer moves at 20 m/s to pins her target into the ground by putting her knee on their back and pushing down, immobilizing 3 of their limbs for 3 posts.

Barrel Roll: Weapon would be body.

Trembling Headbutt : Again... Strength is NOT a weapon type... it would be BODY.


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Fixed, my bad with the weapon type forgot to change before


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For all of these, please use the appropriate template for abilities, which would be the one listed under Dominance. This ensures that Beast Type is also listed in the ability.

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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Tier:[/b]
[b]Cost:[/b]
[b]Beast Type:[/b]
[b]Class:[/b]
[b]Range:[/b]
[b]Duration:[/b]
[b]Cool-Down:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]


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Ah my bad i used the strength one by mistake.


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You did not make the requested changes to Beast Grapple, please make sure you are reading all edits. Made minor edits to formatting and cleaned up the wording a bit. Bump if these are acceptable~

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[b]Name:[/b] Slap Away
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Uses Black Bone hand to slap away[parry] up to 1 C-tier attack.

[b]Name:[/b] Beast Grapple
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]Summer moves at 20 m/s to pin her target into the ground by putting her knee on their back and pushing down, immobilizing 3 of their limbs for 3 posts.  

[b]Name:[/b] Arm Block
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Summer thrusts both forearms together to block up to B-tier damage. Can be sustained to perform Arm Block during the next post.

[b]Name:[/b] Barrel Roll
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Spinning at 10 m/s, Summer moves 5 meters in a direction of her choosing.

[b]Name:[/b] Trembling Headbutt
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]Summer moves at 20m/s to use a defensive headbutt with enough force to stop up to A rank Damage. Can be sustained to perform Trembling Headbutt during the next post.


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All good .. Thank you


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Approved for training.


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http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t3668-bianca-vs-shelia-done#18569[ Training for  Beast Grapple Only Done]

Also i just posted to get the other B [Trempling HeadButt] via abbility Ticket
http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p60-ability-vouchers#18548



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Ability Voucher Training approved: http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p60-ability-vouchers#18552

Beast Grapple training: I'm not approving it yet, because after taking out your OOC note that mentions something having a different name, the following website says you only have 991 words:
http://www.wordcounter.net/

This is the removed portion:
Bianca Cordelia Brown wrote:[Note i know it has another name but i forgot it]


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[b]Name:[/b] Trembling Headbutt
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]Summer moves at 20m/s to use a defensive headbutt with enough force to stop up to A rank Damage. Can be sustained to perform Trembling Headbutt during the next post.


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Added a bit at the bottom to fit that site, done a few tests to work out why it was telling me i had more, in what i use .. It seems mine is counting 30mps as 2-3 words as if i wrote Thrity meters per second, while the word counter thing only counts it as 1. Id remember this for next time.
Booked marked the thing you use for future refence


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Ah, I see XD. Yea, that's weird. Anyways, you are all set now.

Training approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] Beast Grapple
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b]Summer moves at 20 m/s to pin her target into the ground by putting her knee on their back and pushing down, immobilizing 3 of their limbs for 3 posts.


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[b]Name:[/b] Slap Away
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Uses Black Bone hand to slap away[parry] up to 1 C-tier attack.

[b]Name:[/b] Barrel Roll
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Spinning at 10 m/s, Summer moves 5 meters in a direction of her choosing.

[b]Name:[/b] Arm Block
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Summer thrusts both forearms together to block up to B-tier damage. Can be sustained to perform Arm Block during the next post.


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