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1 Hu Kouha Starter Abilities [WIP] on 26/01/15, 06:08 am

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Name: Small Barrage
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Weapon Type:
Class:  Technique/ offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2
Description: Hu juggles her spear from one hand to the other at a speed of 10 m/s, slashing her opponent 5 times to inflict D-tier damage.



Name: Jump
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Supplementary Technique
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Hu jumps in a direction of her choosing with a flip at 10 m/s, landing up to 5 meters away.



Name: Matchstick Blade
Tier: C
Cost: 20 for using and 10 for sustain per post
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: Sustain +1
Description: Hu slides one end of her spear on the ground at 15 m/s towards her opponent, using the friction to ignite the ribbon next to the black blade of the spear, causing any attacks in the next two posts to also cause second-degree burns.


Name: Flashy Parry
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Hu spins her spear at 10 m/s
deflecting up to C tier incoming attacks.


Name: Crescent Sweep
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: Hu ducks and performs a single sweep around her on the ground with her Spear moving at 10 m/s, knocking down all opponents within range of her blade [1.34 meters].





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2 Re: Hu Kouha Starter Abilities [WIP] on 26/01/15, 07:54 am

Rang for all melee attacks should be "Close"

Small Barrage: Range should be Close. Class would just be Offensive. Description also needs to include total amount of damage done (D-tier). Consider rewording the description to the following:
Hu juggles her spear from one hand to the other at a speed of 10 m/s, slashing her opponent 5 times to inflict D-tier damage.

Jump Strike: This would be a supplementary ability, not defensive. Range would be self. This is a movement ability, so the attack would not be included at the end. If you wish to RP this out, that is fine, but keep in mind your movement speed would not apply to the attack. Consider rewording to the following:
Hu jumps in a direction of her choosing with a flip at 10 m/s, landing up to 5 meters away.

Matchstick Blade: Class would be Supplementary. Range would be close. Duration would be either Instant, 1 post, or Sustained. (Duration is th duration of the tech itself, not the duration of any effects produced BY the tech) Cool-down would be either 3 posts or "3 posts or Sustain+1". If you intend to sustain the ability to perform it more than one post in a row, please add the sustain cost to the magoi (20/10). Consider rewording the description to:
Hu slides one end of her spear on the ground at 15 m/s towards her opponent, using the friction to ignite the ribbon next to the black blade of the spear, causing any attacks in the next two posts to also cause second-degree burns.

Crescent Sweep: This tech would be supplementary, not defensive. Range would be close. Cool-down would be two posts. She would not be able to cause an effect beyond the range of the blade. Assuming she is not holding onto the blad on the other end, that would mean she could not cause any effect beyond 1.34 meters. Consider rewording the description to:
Hu ducks and performs a single sweep around her on the ground with her Spear moving at 10 m/s, knocking down all opponents within range of her blade.

You do still have one blank ability in there (you can have a total of five). I would suggest a true defensive technique, such as a parry or block.


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3 Re: Hu Kouha Starter Abilities [WIP] on 26/01/15, 10:07 am

approved and added to vault~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Small Barrage
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]
[b]Class:[/b]  Technique/ offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2
[b]Description:[/b] Hu juggles her spear from one hand to the other at a speed of 10 m/s, slashing her opponent 5 times to inflict D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Jump
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary Technique
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Hu jumps in a direction of her choosing with a flip at 10 m/s, landing up to 5 meters away.

[b]Name:[/b] Flashy Parry
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Hu spins her spear at 10 m/s
deflecting up to C tier incoming attacks.

[b]Name:[/b] Crescent Sweep
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Hu ducks and performs a single sweep around her on the ground with her Spear moving at 10 m/s, knocking down all opponents within range of her blade [1.34 meters].

[b]Name:[/b] Matchstick Blade
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 for using and 10 for sustain per post
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Hu slides one end of her spear on the ground at 15 m/s towards her opponent, using the friction to ignite the ribbon next to the black blade of the spear, causing any attacks in the next two posts to also cause second-degree burns.


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