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1 Merrze [Completed] on 25/01/15, 09:08 pm

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Name: Merrze
Country Affiliation: Reim
Race: Fanalis
Tier: A
Specialization: Warrior- Primary, Beast Tamer- SecondayAge + Birthdate: Age:21 Birthdate: July 17th
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bi-Sexual
Personality:The white lioness has changed much in terms of personality since she first appeared in Reim. Some aspects of her have changed while others have stayed. Merrze has grown into a strong and compassionate person, her previous kindness, which seemed shallow changed into her becoming more selfless and forgiving. The once easy to anger fanalis has learned to control her rage, once overwhelming, it has now become controlled, allowing her to a well composed and rational individual. One thing that has surely stayed true was the young warriors love for adventure. She loves the feeling of seeing new places, exploring what the world has to offer. Despite now looking at the world more seriously, knowing the threats that exist, she still desire to search the world, discovering other peoples and cultures.

The fanalis still has an overprotective nature, causing her troubles when she goes into dangerous situations to save others. She has learned to be more cautious and to think ahead before going into situations. After many errors causing in her own harm because of impatience the idea of thinking before acting has been instilled in her head.When she encounters new places she tends to have her guard up and be very weary of everything around her. Normally she does watch her surroundings but she is not as cautious in places that she is familiar with. This has also allowed her to develop more as a leader, allowing her to be more patient with people. The young girl has learned to see things through the eyes of other people, to but to be stern. From her time in the corps Merrze learned to be kind, but assertive when leading, to toughen people up but help them the best she can.

Despite toughening up she still holds great compassion for those who work under, She regrets whenever she fails a student or someone working under her. She desire to help them grow into strong warriors, and would do what she could to nurture them. Showing motherly like traits at time, treating them like her kids which she desire to see some day surpass her. She believes this whole heartily despite wanting to be a powerful leader one day.
Likes:She likes meat because she only got it as a rare treat when she was a child, so it holds that importance from when she was little. She loves running, it gives her a sense of freedom.
Dislikes: She doesn't like most royal people because she feels they have to much and most are very selfish. She also has a strong dislike for birds because she would often get attacked by them.
Aspirations: She hopes to one day rule her own country so she can create a place where people belong. She hopes to make it a place where people can live happy with out everyday just being a struggle to survive. She wants to do this because during her childhood she lived in the slums and barely had enough food. She has come closer to this goal ever since she acquired a Djinn.
Phobias/fears: She has a major fear of being bound. She is afraid of this because once when she was a child she was kidnapped by slave traders and they kept her locked up and bound to where she couldn't move at all. It's not as bad as when she was younger but when she gets bound to the point where she can barely move she starts to go into a panic attack. It's possible to get her out of the panic attack but only by being comforted by people that she is truly close to.
Face-Claim: Ruler [Fate/Apochrypha]
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Red
Height: 180.34
Weight: 58.967
Appearance: With time Merrze physical appearance has drastically changed from when the young fanalis came to Reim two years prior. She was once a tall skinny girl, with long luxurious hair. Now it is a shallow of its former self, her hair is now short and white. Taking on a color similar to snow ever since her incident with Remus. Her body still tall, is now more curvaceous, and noticeably stronger. Now toned with muscle and riddled with scars showing the hard experiences that she has been through, Her skin retains most of its original white color but there are hints of tan in it, Which giver her a slight gold hue to her skin as she has been living in sunny areas as of recent causing it to tan her skin.

In terms of body language she is now more composed. She now seems to stand stronger, with a more firm and disciplined stance. Her face now stern yet soft, showing how she tries to stay serious yet keep a kind look to her. She walks and moves with prowess, moving quickly and maintaining a strong posture to show her full height, Her manor of dress is also different, she now wears a a dress underneath a set of armor plating, instead of her old red dress. But under the armor she wears a short black dress so as not to constrict her movement.
Rukh Alignment: White Rukh
Special Traits: Lion Tail (something Merrze gained in a thread a while back)
History: Merrze was born in the slums of Balbadd. Her mother was a fanalis but she was told that her father was a fanalis, just like them, who had died before she was born of a major illness. When she was very young around the ages of 3 or 4 she would play outside by herself because most of the other kids where afraid of her. She would accidentally hurt some of the other kids when she played with them so they would steer clear of her and call her monster. When she was 6 her mother had come down with a fatal illness and had soon died after coming down with it.

She was left all by herself with no known relatives and had to survive on her own. She had of course didn't have a lot of food before but atleast she was happy with her mom.Now she had to find food on her own. There were times where she would have to fight birds for the carcasses of dead animals just to survive through the night. One day while doing a odd job to earn some money she met another young girl name Anaizi who taught her how to get food easily. They quickly became good friends and would help each other out so they wouldn't starve. For along time in awhile her life was somewhat fun.

This happiness didn't last for long though, it ended very soon. A week after her 10th birthday her area was invaded by some bandits who found there way into the area. She and her friend where kidnapped and sold to slave traders. Being a fanalis she was bound very tightly so she wouldn't have a chance to escape from her bonds. Her friend was sold off quickly because the traders said she was a very pretty girl but she was confused on why her friend would be bought because of that. She was held in captivity for the next two years until she was bought by a kind man.

The man bought her so she could be free. Before letting her go he let her live with her. The mans name was Leon and he was an ex-gladiator. He trained her how to become a better fighter so she could defend herself when the time came. She had fun times with him and didn't want to leave his side. But she wanted to make the world a better place so soon she had decided to depart from him. Before she left his side he gave her a read dress and told her that she should try to gain some fame and allies so she could have better chances at accomplishing her goal. She then left his side and started wondering the world. She had no idea what was in store for her or what type of people she will meet but she is willing to go through anything to accomplish her her goals. She also can't help but be excited by adventuring the world and seeing what it has to hold.
Role-Play Sample:Merrze sat in the cold dark room wondering how she was going to escape. The air was thick and had a terrible smell, something similar to a corpse. The ground was damp and sticky, she had a good idea what made the ground all sticky but she didn't want to dwell on it. She tried to focus on surviving, she hadn't eaten in a couple of weeks. She honestly lost track of time but, it felt as if someone had kicked her in the gut over and over again. The air tasted terrible and every breath made her want to gag and puke. Today would be the day she would escape her hellish prison though. The guard walked in to give her a stale piece of bread. She took this moment to headbutt the guard.  

She took his keys and quickly unlocked her shackles. And burst down the corridor, she felt the wind running through her hair and she felt great, she could do anything now that she was free. She used whatever energy she had left to escape this hot, disgusting, foul-smelling place. She just continued to run like an animal, she ran until she saw an exit and burst through the door. "Finally free, I'm so glad to see the beautiful blue sky." She fell to her knees and huffed, smiling as if it were the best moment of her life.



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2 Re: Merrze [Completed] on 25/01/15, 10:39 pm

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Pretty good. Normally we do not allow individuals to mention Djinn in their character apps as an aspiration, however considering that they're becoming more and more well known it is believable that you may have overheard something, somewhere.

Just keep in mind that not much is known to the common person about Djinn and the like.

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[b]Name:[/b] Merrze
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Balbadd
[b]Race:[/b] Fanalis
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Specialization:[/b] Strength
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] Age:19 Birthdate:July 17th
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Sexuality:[/b] Bi-Sexual
[b]Personality:[/b]Merrze is a very caring person but is cautious of people that she doesn't know. She loves animals, except for birds, and loves playing with them in her downtime. She is quick to anger since she is a fanalis but she does her best to control it, but her best isn't good enough when it comes to that. She is very adventurous and loves to explore new places. When she sees things that she doesn't like she acts quickly to stop it unless there is nothing she can do about it.  She tends to protect weaker people and is good at leading others except for the fact that she is hot headed. When she encounters new places she tends to have her guard up and be very weary of everything around her. Normally she does watch her surroundings but she is not as cautious in places that she is familiar with. A down side of hers is she easily convinced by others but she is still slightly weary around new people or people who seem untrustworthy. When she is alone she likes practice her skills because she doesn't want them getting rusty or possibly getting weaker incase she gets herself in any sort of dangerous situation or the likes.
[b]Likes:[/b]She likes meat because she only got it as a rare treat when she was a child, so it holds that importance from when she was little. She loves running, it gives her a sense of freedom.
[b]Dislikes:[/b] She doesn't like most royal people because she feels they have to much and most are very selfish. She also has a strong dislike for birds because she would often get attacked by them.
[b]Aspirations:[/b] She hopes to one day rule her own country so she can create a place where people belong. She hopes to make it a place where people can live happy with out everyday just being a struggle to survive. She wants to do this because during her childhood she lived in the slums and barely had enough food, In order to achieve this she hopes to get a Djinn to help people and enough followers to create the type of country that she strives for.
[b]Phobias/fears:[/b] She has a major fear of being bound. She is afraid of this because once when she was a child she was kidnapped by slave traders and they kept her locked up and bound to where she couldn't move at all. It's not as bad as when she was younger but when she gets bound to the point where she can barely move she starts to go into a panic attack. It's possible to get her out of the panic attack but only by being comforted by people that she is truly close to.
[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Sakura Kyouko from Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica
[b]Hair Color:[/b] Red
[b]Eye Color:[/b] Red
[b]Height:[/b] 180.34
[b]Weight:[/b] 58.967
[b]Appearance:[/b]Merrze has long red hair which she generally has held up into a ponytail. She has bright red eyes that resemble a color similar to that of a rose. She is considered tall for a women and has a slender body with a medium sized bust. She normally wears a red colored dress and on her right arm she has a silver bracelet which she was given by her mother before she passed away. She has calm demeanor most of the time but during a fight she gets somewhat vicious and acts wild. She shows her emotions very easily though. When she get's very happy she tends to smile alot and stand with her arms behind her back and when she is sad she tends to hide her face. She shows hunger by drooling and starting constantly at food or animals that are eaten as food.
[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] White Rukh
[b]Special Traits:[/b]
[b]History:[/b] Merrze was born in the slums of Balbadd. Her mother was a fanalis but she was told that her father was a fanalis, just like them, who had died before she was born of a major illness. When she was very young around the ages of 3 or 4 she would play outside by herself because most of the other kids where afraid of her. She would accidentally hurt some of the other kids when she played with them so they would steer clear of her and call her monster. When she was 6 her mother had come down with a fatal illness and had soon died after coming down with it.

She was left all by herself with no known relatives and had to survive on her own. She had of course didn't have a lot of food before but atleast she was happy with her mom.Now she had to find food on her own. There were times where she would have to fight birds for the carcasses of dead animals just to survive through the night. One day while doing a odd job to earn some money she met another young girl name Anaizi who taught her how to get food easily. They quickly became good friends and would help each other out so they wouldn't starve. For along time in awhile her life was somewhat fun.

This happiness didn't last for long though, it ended very soon. A week after her 10th birthday her area was invaded by some bandits who found there way into the area. She and her friend where kidnapped and sold to slave traders. Being a fanalis she was bound very tightly so she wouldn't have a chance to escape from her bonds. Her friend was sold off quickly because the traders said she was a very pretty girl but she was confused on why her friend would be bought because of that. She was held in captivity for the next two years until she was bought by a kind man.

The man bought her so she could be free. Before letting her go he let her live with her. The mans name was Leon and he was an ex-gladiator. He trained her how to become a better fighter so she could defend herself when the time came. She had fun times with him and didn't want to leave his side. But she wanted to make the world a better place so soon she had decided to depart from him. Before she left his side he gave her a read dress and told her that she should try to gain some fame and allies so she could have better chances at accomplishing her goal. She then left his side and started wondering the world. She had no idea what was in store for her or what type of people she will meet but she is willing to go through anything to accomplish her her goals. She also can't help but be excited by adventuring the world and seeing what it has to hold.
[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]Merrze sat in the cold dark room wondering how she was going to escape. The air was thick and had a terrible smell, something similar to a corpse. The ground was damp and sticky, she had a good idea what made the ground all sticky but she didn't want to dwell on it. She tried to focus on surviving, she hadn't eaten in a couple of weeks. She honestly lost track of time but, it felt as if someone had kicked her in the gut over and over again. The air tasted terrible and every breath made her want to gag and puke. Today would be the day she would escape her hellish prison though. The guard walked in to give her a stale piece of bread. She took this moment to headbutt the guard.  

She took his keys and quickly unlocked her shackles. And burst down the corridor, she felt the wind running through her hair and she felt great, she could do anything now that she was free. She used whatever energy she had left to escape this hot, disgusting, foul-smelling place. She just continued to run like an animal, she ran until she saw an exit and burst through the door. "Finally free, I'm so glad to see the beautiful blue sky." She fell to her knees and huffed, smiling as if it were the best moment of her life.


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3 Re: Merrze [Completed] on 23/01/17, 07:46 pm

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4 Re: Merrze [Completed] on 23/01/17, 08:18 pm

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Everything looks good to me! Character Approved!

I assume you know what to do after this, you'll have to resubmit any items/abilities you had and convert them into the new system. Make sure you update your vault with your new character sheet, and items/abilities once they are finished as well.~

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[b]Name:[/b] Merrze
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Reim
[b]Race:[/b] Fanalis
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Specialization:[/b] Warrior- Primary, Beast Tamer- Seconday
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] Age:21 Birthdate: July 17th
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[b]Sexuality:[/b] Bi-Sexual
[b]Personality:[/b]The white lioness has changed much in terms of personality since she first appeared in Reim. Some aspects of her have changed while others have stayed. Merrze has grown into a strong and compassionate person, her previous kindness, which seemed shallow changed into her becoming more selfless and forgiving. The once easy to anger fanalis has learned to control her rage, once overwhelming, it has now become controlled, allowing her to a well composed and rational individual. One thing that has surely stayed true was the young warriors love for adventure. She loves the feeling of seeing new places, exploring what the world has to offer. Despite now looking at the world more seriously, knowing the threats that exist, she still desire to search the world, discovering other peoples and cultures.

The fanalis still has an overprotective nature, causing her troubles when she goes into dangerous situations to save others. She has learned to be more cautious and to think ahead before going into situations. After many errors causing in her own harm because of impatience the idea of thinking before acting has been instilled in her head.When she encounters new places she tends to have her guard up and be very weary of everything around her. Normally she does watch her surroundings but she is not as cautious in places that she is familiar with. This has also allowed her to develop more as a leader, allowing her to be more patient with people. The young girl has learned to see things through the eyes of other people, to but to be stern. From her time in the corps Merrze learned to be kind, but assertive when leading, to toughen people up but help them the best she can.

Despite toughening up she still holds great compassion for those who work under, She regrets whenever she fails a student or someone working under her. She desire to help them grow into strong warriors, and would do what she could to nurture them. Showing motherly like traits at time, treating them like her kids which she desire to see some day surpass her. She believes this whole heartily despite wanting to be a powerful leader one day.
[b]Likes:[/b]She likes meat because she only got it as a rare treat when she was a child, so it holds that importance from when she was little. She loves running, it gives her a sense of freedom.
[b]Dislikes:[/b] She doesn't like most royal people because she feels they have to much and most are very selfish. She also has a strong dislike for birds because she would often get attacked by them.
[b]Aspirations:[/b] She hopes to one day rule her own country so she can create a place where people belong. She hopes to make it a place where people can live happy with out everyday just being a struggle to survive. She wants to do this because during her childhood she lived in the slums and barely had enough food. She has come closer to this goal ever since she acquired a Djinn.
[b]Phobias/fears:[/b] She has a major fear of being bound. She is afraid of this because once when she was a child she was kidnapped by slave traders and they kept her locked up and bound to where she couldn't move at all. It's not as bad as when she was younger but when she gets bound to the point where she can barely move she starts to go into a panic attack. It's possible to get her out of the panic attack but only by being comforted by people that she is truly close to.
[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Ruler [Fate/Apochrypha]
[b]Hair Color:[/b] White
[b]Eye Color:[/b] Red
[b]Height:[/b] 180.34cm
[b]Weight:[/b] 58.967kg
[b]Appearance:[/b] With time Merrze physical appearance has drastically changed from when the young fanalis came to Reim two years prior. She was once a tall skinny girl, with long luxurious hair. Now it is a shallow of its former self, her hair is now short and white. Taking on a color similar to snow ever since her incident with Remus. Her body still tall, is now more curvaceous, and noticeably stronger. Now toned with muscle and riddled with scars showing the hard experiences that she has been through, Her skin retains most of its original white color but there are hints of tan in it, Which giver her a slight gold hue to her skin as she has been living in sunny areas as of recent causing it to tan her skin.

In terms of body language she is now more composed. She now seems to stand stronger, with a more firm and disciplined stance. Her face now stern yet soft, showing how she tries to stay serious yet keep a kind look to her. She walks and moves with prowess, moving quickly and maintaining a strong posture to show her full height, Her manor of dress is also different, she now wears a a dress underneath a set of armor plating, instead of her old red dress. But under the armor she wears a short black dress so as not to constrict her movement.
[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] White Rukh
[b]Special Traits:[/b] Lion Tail (something Merrze gained in a thread a while back)
[b]History:[/b] Merrze was born in the slums of Balbadd. Her mother was a fanalis but she was told that her father was a fanalis, just like them, who had died before she was born of a major illness. When she was very young around the ages of 3 or 4 she would play outside by herself because most of the other kids where afraid of her. She would accidentally hurt some of the other kids when she played with them so they would steer clear of her and call her monster. When she was 6 her mother had come down with a fatal illness and had soon died after coming down with it.

She was left all by herself with no known relatives and had to survive on her own. She had of course didn't have a lot of food before but atleast she was happy with her mom.Now she had to find food on her own. There were times where she would have to fight birds for the carcasses of dead animals just to survive through the night. One day while doing a odd job to earn some money she met another young girl name Anaizi who taught her how to get food easily. They quickly became good friends and would help each other out so they wouldn't starve. For along time in awhile her life was somewhat fun.

This happiness didn't last for long though, it ended very soon. A week after her 10th birthday her area was invaded by some bandits who found there way into the area. She and her friend where kidnapped and sold to slave traders. Being a fanalis she was bound very tightly so she wouldn't have a chance to escape from her bonds. Her friend was sold off quickly because the traders said she was a very pretty girl but she was confused on why her friend would be bought because of that. She was held in captivity for the next two years until she was bought by a kind man.

The man bought her so she could be free. Before letting her go he let her live with her. The mans name was Leon and he was an ex-gladiator. He trained her how to become a better fighter so she could defend herself when the time came. She had fun times with him and didn't want to leave his side. But she wanted to make the world a better place so soon she had decided to depart from him. Before she left his side he gave her a read dress and told her that she should try to gain some fame and allies so she could have better chances at accomplishing her goal. She then left his side and started wondering the world. She had no idea what was in store for her or what type of people she will meet but she is willing to go through anything to accomplish her her goals. She also can't help but be excited by adventuring the world and seeing what it has to hold.
[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]Merrze sat in the cold dark room wondering how she was going to escape. The air was thick and had a terrible smell, something similar to a corpse. The ground was damp and sticky, she had a good idea what made the ground all sticky but she didn't want to dwell on it. She tried to focus on surviving, she hadn't eaten in a couple of weeks. She honestly lost track of time but, it felt as if someone had kicked her in the gut over and over again. The air tasted terrible and every breath made her want to gag and puke. Today would be the day she would escape her hellish prison though. The guard walked in to give her a stale piece of bread. She took this moment to headbutt the guard.  

She took his keys and quickly unlocked her shackles. And burst down the corridor, she felt the wind running through her hair and she felt great, she could do anything now that she was free. She used whatever energy she had left to escape this hot, disgusting, foul-smelling place. She just continued to run like an animal, she ran until she saw an exit and burst through the door. "Finally free, I'm so glad to see the beautiful blue sky." She fell to her knees and huffed, smiling as if it were the best moment of her life.


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