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1 Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 11:54 am

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Name: Pin-Point
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Stamina
Weapon Type: Bow
Class Offensive
Range: 50 Metres
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 7 Posts
Description:
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.
-50 metres range
-A tier Damage
-30 m/s Speed
-Single Shot


Name: Covering
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Stamina
Weapon Type: Bow
Class Defensive
Range: 50 Metres
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 7 Posts
Description:
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.
-50 Metres Range
-30m/s Speed
-Single Shot

Name: Webbing
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Stamina
Weapon Type: Bow
Class Supplementary
Range: 50 Metres
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 7 Posts
Description:
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.
-Immobilise on Hit
-Scale - 25 metres
-30 M/S speed
-Single



Last edited by Vodarara on 02/01/15, 01:30 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 01:16 pm

At B-tier, you may only have a single A-tier ability

Pin-Point: Description does not include range or damage, consider rewording to the following:
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.

Covering: This would not be offensive, as it is not intended to deal damage. It would be defensive and needs to specify what amount of damage it can deflect. Consider rewording to the following:
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.

Webbing:Does not include how long the effect lasts. Consider rewording to the following:
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.


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3 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 01:30 pm

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Editted

Its 3 A tier at A tier though isn't it so these will be my 3 for then and ill probs choose covering first.


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4 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 02/01/15, 03:43 pm

Then Covering is approved for training. Once you hit A-tier, the others can be approved.

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[b]Name:[/b] Covering
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.


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5 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 26/02/15, 07:40 pm

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6 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 26/02/15, 08:41 pm

training approved, add to your vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Covering
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots an arrow at 30 m/s, aiming to deflect an incoming weapon with 50 meters of himself. This shot can deflect up to Omega-tier attacks.


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7 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 04/03/15, 09:23 am

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Requesting the next two dex abilities be officially ready for training please


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8 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 04/03/15, 09:55 am

edited for formatting, if these are acceptable, they are approved for training~

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[b]Name:[/b] Pin-Point
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Webbing
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.


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9 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 04:37 pm

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10 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 05:50 pm

you must use the ability at least once during the training


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11 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 06:34 pm

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Damn sorry editted and added to the end.


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12 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 18/03/15, 06:40 pm

approved, add to vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Pin-Point
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a single shot at 30 m/s up to 50 meters away to inflict A-tier damage.


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13 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 16/07/15, 07:14 am

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14 Re: Vodarara Archery Tech's on 16/07/15, 09:11 am

training approved, edited out duration for you, please do the same for pin-point in your vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Webbing
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40|20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 50 Metres
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
The user shoots a special arrow containing an immobilizing glue at 30m/s within 50 meters of themselves. On impact, a 25 meter wide puddle is created that immobilizes anything in it for four posts.


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