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1 Altair Strength Techs on 13/12/14, 12:04 am

Name: Phoenix Blade
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Magoi
Weapon Type: Sword, Magoi Manipulation
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 14 Posts
Description: A technique that overcharges a sword with Magoi, causing it to become visible, and wreathing the sword in a golden flame-like shape.  The technique is executed in a jumping downward slash.  The jump is 9 meters long and 9 meters high.  The blade moves at 25 m/s, and deals A Tier damage.

Name: Gale Stepping
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Magoi, 15 Sustain
Weapon Type: Body, Magoi Manipulation
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 10 + Sustain
Description: By infusing the legs and feet with Magoi, the user can easily reach speeds of up to 20 m/s.  This effect lasts for 4 posts.

Name: Blade Lariat
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: By switching the blade to a reverse grip, the user performs a horizontal spinning slash.  The Blade moves at 20 m/s and deals B tier damage.

Name: Third Wasp's Dance
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Defensive
Range: Melee
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: The user rapidly deflects incoming attacks with the sword.  The technique speed is 20 m/s.  it can deflect 8 D, 4 C, 2 B, or 1 A tier attack.



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2 Re: Altair Strength Techs on 13/12/14, 07:23 am

Phoenix Blade:You cannot train an Omega Tier ability until you, yourself have reached Omega tier. That being said, you would be unable to cause combustion with magoi manipulation, this falls under heat magic. Please also specify how big the jump is.

Part the Seas:If this is intended as a defensive technique, it would block up to Omega tier damage. As it stands, this appears to be more of an offensive technique. Just as a suggestion, Magoi Manipulation techniques are much better suited as offensive techs and making it defensive would be somewhat of a waste. I would suggest making it an offensive technique that travels away from the blade as it is brought down to inflict damage. This is totally up to you, however. If you wish to keep it as defensive, please word this as a parry of some type and increase the amount of damage blocked.

Gale Stepping:The weapon type would be body. As for the duration, I would have to check with Garret, but I believe to have it extend beyond a single post, the ability would need to be sustained.

Blade Lariat:The "difficult to perceive and block" is RP fluff, and should be removed. Please also include that the blade would be traveling in a horizontal direction during the attack.

Third Wasp's Dance:For this move, you need to indicate how the blade is moving to deflect the attacks. Is it moving in horizontal slashes, diagonal slashes, vertical movements?


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3 Re: Altair Strength Techs on 13/12/14, 06:27 pm

Edit's Made


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4 Re: Altair Strength Techs on 13/12/14, 06:52 pm

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Phoenix Blade: Since you have both a jump and an attack in the ability, it would have to split effectiveness. Mind you, that's 2 B-Tier effects (B-Tier damage, B-Tier jump) for the price of 40, whereas it would otherwise cost you 60 to perform both techniques simultaneously. It is your choice on what to do with it from here, but I edited it to be appropriate in my below code.

Gale Stepping: Changed Duration from Instantaneous to 'Sustain', and removed the sustain thing from Cooldown, since you'll never be able to sustain a B-Tier technique for longer than 4 posts.

If you are cool with these, bump please ^_^


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[b]Name:[/b] Phoenix Blade
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword, Magoi Manipulation
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 14 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] A technique that overcharges a sword with Magoi, causing it to become visible, and wreathing the sword in a golden flame-like shape.  The technique is executed in a jumping downward slash.  The jump is 9 meters long and 9 meters high.  The blade moves at 25 m/s, and deals B Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Gale Stepping
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi, 15 Sustain
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body, Magoi Manipulation
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b] By infusing the legs and feet with Magoi, the user can easily reach speeds of up to 20 m/s.  This effect lasts for 4 posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Blade Lariat
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] By switching the blade to a reverse grip, the user performs a horizontal spinning slash.  The Blade moves at 20 m/s and deals B tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Third Wasp's Dance
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user rapidly deflects incoming attacks with the sword.  The technique speed is 20 m/s.  it can deflect 8 D, 4 C, 2 B, or 1 A tier attack.


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5 Re: Altair Strength Techs on 14/12/14, 06:50 pm

i would forget to bump. Bumping!


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6 Re: Altair Strength Techs on 14/12/14, 08:02 pm

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Ability Voucher Training Approved:
http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p15-ability-vouchers#14879



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[b]Name:[/b] Gale Stepping
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi, 15 Sustain
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body, Magoi Manipulation
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b] By infusing the legs and feet with Magoi, the user can easily reach speeds of up to 20 m/s.  This effect lasts for 4 posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Blade Lariat
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] By switching the blade to a reverse grip, the user performs a horizontal spinning slash.  The Blade moves at 20 m/s and deals B tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Third Wasp's Dance
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user rapidly deflects incoming attacks with the sword.  The technique speed is 20 m/s.  it can deflect 8 D, 4 C, 2 B, or 1 A tier attack.


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8 Re: Altair Strength Techs on 17/12/14, 09:01 pm

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Approved as follows:

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[b]Name:[/b] Phoenix Blade
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword, Magoi Manipulation
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Melee
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 14 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] A technique that overcharges a sword with Magoi, causing it to become visible, and wreathing the sword in a golden flame-like shape.  The technique is executed in a jumping downward slash.  The jump is 7 meters long and 7 meters high.  The blade moves at 25 m/s, and deals B Tier damage.


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