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1 Liri's Spells on 09/11/14, 12:43 pm

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Name: Growth
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 1 Posts
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description:
A spell that causes the cells of the human body to grow out of control momentarily, this ability allows for Liri to cast a .5 meter ball of magoi at 10m/s at a target within 10 meters that would cause five 10cm sized tumors to grow on her victim. These tumors will fall off at the end of the post, leaving raw and painful wounds, causing D-tier damage.

Name: Light Heal
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description:
This is a simple healing spell that allows for Liri to heal small cuts and wounds on a single target within 10 meters, healing up to D-tier damage over two posts. The spell travels from Liri to the target at 10 m/s.

Name: Plant Extension
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters
Duration: 2 Posts
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description:
This spell allows for Liri to spur the growth of plants within 10 meters of herself. She can change the direction they grow towards in order to create a thick barrier comprised of local plant life to entangle one limb of an opponent for two posts to immobilize them or stop a skill from being done.

Name: Sensory
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magi
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters
Duration: 1 Posts
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description:
This spell allows Liri to sense and track any living beings within a five meter diameter of her position. This sensory network expands from her after casting the spell at 10 m/s. The Rukh can then give her information via extrasensory capabilities, giving her an image of life forms in the area and allowing her to see them and their movements. The dome of sensory always moves with her, keeping her at the center of radius at all times.

Name: Superb Cleanse
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Element: Life
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description:
This is a simple spell that creates a 10 meter bubble around that expands at 15 m/s around Liri. She can bend the shape of the bubble to fit in certain individuals, but the bubble cannot be stretched out more than give meters in any given direction. Anyone within the bubble will heal C-ranked wounds and lower over two posts.



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2 Re: Liri's Spells on 09/11/14, 01:17 pm

Growth: This would be an offensive spell and the duration would only be 1 post, cooldown would be 2 posts. The damage needs to be listed in the description, as well. You would need to include the speed the spell travels at and how far it is capable of traveling. Consider changing the description to this:
A spell that causes the cells of the human body to grow out of control momentarily, this ability allows for Liri to cast a .5 meter ball of magoi at 10m/s at a target within 10 meters that would cause five 10cm sized tumors to grow on her victim. These tumors will fall off at the end of the post, leaving raw and painful wounds, causing D-tier damage.

Light Heal: This would be a one post duration, 2 post cooldown. Range could be up to 10 meters. For the description, you need to list the amount healed, how far the target can be, how long it takes to heal. Consider going with the following:
This is a simple healing spell that allows for Liri to heal small cuts and wounds on a single target within 10 meters, healing up to D-tier damage over two posts.

Hair Extension:Range would be self, duration 1 post, cooldown 2 posts. While you would be able to make your hair grow, you would not be able to manipulate it or to fly with it. If you are wanting a flight spell, you could have Gravity Lift, which is in the Tomb of Spells and a C-tier spell.

Sensory:Duration 1 post, cool-down 2 posts. Also, you would be able to detect magic "charging" with this spell, or be able to see their muscles if they were invisible. Consider changing the words to:
This spell allows Liri to sense and track any living beings within a five meter diameter area that she can move at 10m/s within ten meters of herself through her magic. The Rukh can then give her information via extrasensory capabilities, giving her an image of life forms in the area and allowing her to see them and their movements.

Superb Cleanse:Duration 1 post, cool-down 3 posts. Healing also no longer mitigates damage of any type. You need to include the size of the bubble and the speed at which it expands. You also cannot choose what in an AOE effect takes healing and/or damage. Consider wording it like so:
This is a simple spell that creates a 5 meter bubble around that expands at 15 m/s around Liri. Anyone within the bubble will heal C-ranked wounds and lower over two posts.


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3 Re: Liri's Spells on 09/11/14, 04:55 pm

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Alright I've made edits, but I would suggest editing the ability guidelines as they still say that healing reduces damage.

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4 Re: Liri's Spells on 09/11/14, 05:40 pm

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Light Heal:
I had edited this spell so that it shows how fast it moves from you to the target. It has the wrong duration in there. Duration is only for how long you cast it. Description should explain how long things like Status Effects last. If you are casting it for longer than 1 post, please put in sustain, and follow the sustain rules. I edited the Duration descriptor to make this more clear.

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[b]Name:[/b] Light Heal
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Description:[/b]
This is a simple healing spell that allows for Liri to heal small cuts and wounds on a single target within 10 meters, healing up to D-tier damage over two posts. The spell travels from Liri to the target at 10 m/s.

Plant Extension:
Intelligence Specializations aren't allowed to have defensive spells. Change this to Supplementary and remove the 'blocks D-Tier damage', or change it to offensive and make it deal damage in some form so that it can clash with other abilities. Changing it to supplementary will allow you to keep it so long as it doesn't mention 'defending' in its wording. Clashing rules will cover all of that, and you can most certainly clash against another ability with a supplementary if it makes sense.


Superb Cleanse:
I fixed this, but I wanted to make sure you were aware that the maximum scale for a C-Tier ability is 10 meters, which is measured in diameter for spheres or by a single side for any polygon object, including the line that goes from its bottom to its top. Essentially, so long as it can fit in a 10x10x10 box, it is within the scale guidelines of the ability. Specifying a sphere means that the largest it can get is a 10 meter diameter. This means that it can get up to 5 meters away from you, and not 20 meters away from you.

Sensory:
Slightly off in scale, which I fixed. 5 meter diameter for D-Tier abilities, which means 2.5 meters in each direction. If you want to edit it to change it so that you can move the dome of sensory network around at 10 m/s, feel free to make that change. It would be able to move around within your range.


Approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] Growth
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
A spell that causes the cells of the human body to grow out of control momentarily, this ability allows for Liri to cast a .5 meter ball of magoi at 10m/s at a target within 10 meters that would cause five 10cm sized tumors to grow on her victim. These tumors will fall off at the end of the post, leaving raw and painful wounds, causing D-tier damage.


[b]Name:[/b] Sensory
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
This spell allows Liri to sense and track any living beings within a five meter diameter of her position. This sensory network expands from her after casting the spell at 10 m/s. The Rukh can then give her information via extrasensory capabilities, giving her an image of life forms in the area and allowing her to see them and their movements.


[b]Name:[/b] Superb Cleanse
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
This is a simple spell that creates a 10 meter bubble around that expands at 15 m/s around Liri. She can bend the shape of the bubble to fit in certain individuals, but the bubble cannot be stretched out more than give meters in any given direction. Anyone within the bubble will heal C-ranked wounds and lower over two posts.


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5 Re: Liri's Spells on 09/11/14, 05:48 pm

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Alright, thanks! I think I fixed them now

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6 Re: Liri's Spells on 10/11/14, 12:14 am

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It isn't actually written anywhere, but generally when staff grades abilities they also keep an eye out for variance balancing. This is when an ability is made to variate across multiple tiers of effectiveness in a single ability. For example, a Magician creating a B-Tier fireball that can either be as big as 15 meters in diameter or as small as .5 m in diameter. Since these are such vastly different sizes, we require players to make separate abilities for it because of their differences. It is with this in mind that I changed your spell so that it still works within C-Tier variables.


Barring any issues Ari might see with any of these, these spells are approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] Growth
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
A spell that causes the cells of the human body to grow out of control momentarily, this ability allows for Liri to cast a .5 meter ball of magoi at 10m/s at a target within 10 meters that would cause five 10cm sized tumors to grow on her victim. These tumors will fall off at the end of the post, leaving raw and painful wounds, causing D-tier damage.


[b]Name:[/b] Light Heal
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b]
This is a simple healing spell that allows for Liri to heal small cuts and wounds on a single target within 10 meters, healing up to D-tier damage over two posts. The spell travels from Liri to the target at 10 m/s.


[b]Name:[/b] Plant Extension
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b]
This spell allows for Liri to spur the growth of plants within 10 meters of herself. She can change the direction they grow towards in order to create a thick barrier comprised of local plant life to entangle one limb of an opponent for two posts to immobilize them or stop a skill from being done.


[b]Name:[/b] Sensory
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b]
This spell allows Liri to sense and track any living beings within a five meter diameter of her position. This sensory network expands from her after casting the spell at 10 m/s. The Rukh can then give her information via extrasensory capabilities, giving her an image of life forms in the area and allowing her to see them and their movements. The dome of sensory always moves with her, keeping her at the center of radius at all times.


[b]Name:[/b] Superb Cleanse
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
This is a simple spell that creates a 10 meter bubble around that expands at 15 m/s around Liri. She can bend the shape of the bubble and reduce its overall diameter down to 5 meters in order to fit in certain individuals, but the bubble cannot be stretched out more or less than the given meters in any given direction. Anyone within the bubble will heal C-ranked wounds and lower over two posts.


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