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1 Sara's Abilities [Done] on 02/03/14, 03:25 pm

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Name: Fanalis's Wrath
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Magoi
Class: Offense
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 5 Post
Description:  Sara gets into a close range of a opponent and then unleashes 50 fist at the opponent each moving at 25 m/s. In total all fist deal B-rank damage collectively and will leave an opponent bloodied with most bones in their body shattered. This leaves a lot of Internal damage throughout the opponent's body.


Name: Battle Cry
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Class: Defense
Range: 20 M
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 Post
Description: This technique moves at 20 m/s. The user of the technique will release a large bellow that will halt anything in its range(20 M) and affect all things. This technique has the capability of bursting ear drums dealing C-rank damage to them and losing sound in the ear for two post if the opponent is within range of the user while this technique is being used. The sound tends to disorient the opponent causing dizziness for 1 post similar to that of a flash bang without a flash. After the one regains their hearing simply hearing will hurt their ears since C-rank damage was dealt to the ear drum. This technique can be countered if one blocks their ear before the scream. If blocking the ear during the scream it will prove ineffective since the damage would of already been done


Name: Fanalis Jump
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Class: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: 20 M
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 Post
Description: Sara jumps up showing off her skills as a Fanalis. When she jumps she moves at 20 m/s in the direction she jumps in. Then whilst in the air she lands on her feet causing a shockwave that goes in all directions for 20 meters. It can be used to escape or attack.


Name: Fanalis Perception
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 M
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user faces the opponent and if an attack is coming of the rank of D or less, the User will move at 15 m/s quickly dodging the attack as long as they have a minimum of .175 seconds to react.

Name: Sword Parry
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Class: Defense
Range: 4 feet
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: Sara takes her sword and uses the flat part of her sword to hit someone else's weapon. She then uses her strength to push up the sword causing the opponent to leave their chest wide open since their blade will be in the air. This can be used to block 1 C-rank and 2 D-ranks.



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2 Re: Sara's Abilities [Done] on 03/03/14, 09:08 pm

Duquin

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Finalis Wrath: The way this is worded makes it seem like B rank damage is dealt 50 times. Please reword so the total impact of all the fists is B rank. I'm guessing you meant to type that originally from the way the sentence flows. Darn those typos!

Battle Cry: Please change this so it doesn't knock targets back the full distance of 20 meters. This would mean that from your scream alone, someone standing next to you would be sent flying over 60ft away. That is beyond the means of a C rank ability. Instead, please give a base knockback distance that will occur so long as a target is within range. Since this is a sound wave you shouldn't be able to push anyone back very far at all. But it should still be able to stop people in their tracks as shown in the gif.

Please make those changes and this will have my blessings.


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3 Re: Sara's Abilities [Done] on 03/03/14, 09:22 pm

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Changes made, bump.

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4 Re: Sara's Abilities [Done] on 03/03/14, 09:38 pm

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Approved :3


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