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1 Rurukoha's Starter Spells on 07/10/14, 06:25 pm

Rurukoha

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Name: Gravity Lift, Stage 1
Tier: C
Cost: 20 on cast; 10 sustain
Element: Gravity
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

Name: Nigris Sagitta
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Creates a 1/2m x 1/2m bolt of black energy that is 1m long and moves at 10m/s dealing D tier damage on impact.

Name: Oscuro Motus
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description:A black energy envelops the users feet and allows the user to move at 10m/s for 5m.

Name: Nigris Falce
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Creates a 5m wide Blade of black energy that moves at 10m/s a deals D tier damage upon impact and can hit multiple people.

Name: Lance Zel Kuroi
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 20m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Creates a long lance like energy bolt that is hurled 10m/s and explodes upon impact. The explosion has a 5m diameter, and deals D tier damage.



Last edited by Rurukoha on 07/10/14, 10:11 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Cause Yaku Said)

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2 Re: Rurukoha's Starter Spells on 07/10/14, 06:36 pm

Duquin

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-This would count as a defensive spell which magician's aren't allowed to create.

Oscuro Motus
-This spell should mention a bit more about what is actually happening. You are only listing the effect here.
-If it is for movement then you should also mention the distance you could move which is noted under Scale in the ability guidelines.

Lance Zel Kuroi/Gravity Lift, Stage 1
-You only get 1 C-tier for starters so one of these would need to be trained. Which of the two would you like for free and which would you like to train?


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3 Re: Rurukoha's Starter Spells on 07/10/14, 06:48 pm

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Bump for completion

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4 Re: Rurukoha's Starter Spells on 07/10/14, 06:56 pm

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You didn't make the changes I requested for Oscuro Motus.


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5 Re: Rurukoha's Starter Spells on 07/10/14, 10:32 pm

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The following wording on your spells are approved:



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[b]Name:[/b] Gravity Lift, Stage 1
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 on cast; 10 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

[b]Name:[/b] Nigris Sagitta
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Creates a 1/2m x 1/2m bolt of black energy that is 1m long and moves at 10m/s dealing D tier damage on impact.

[b]Name:[/b] Oscuro Motus
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b]A black energy envelops the users feet and allows the user to move at 10m/s for 5m.

[b]Name:[/b] Nigris Falce
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Creates a 5m wide Blade of black energy that moves at 10m/s a deals D tier damage upon impact and can hit multiple people.

[b]Name:[/b] Lance Zel Kuroi
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Creates a long lance like energy bolt that is hurled 10m/s and explodes upon impact. The explosion has a 5m diameter, and deals D tier damage.


If there are any issues, or you wish to change the wording, feel free to post that. I have edited some of the durations for you slightly so that it reflects your intent. If you're good with them, let me know in CBOX and I will move them to the 'Trained' section.


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