Altair Loros' Razor Techs 2

Name: Caimian Reza
Tier: B
Djinn: Caim
Cost: 30 Magoi
Type: Razor Magic
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 m
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: The user uses his blade as a reflective surface, and shines a light upon an opponent.  The light is given a razor edge by Caim, and deals B tier damage to whatever is struck.  The beam is 1 inch in diameter.  The beam moves at 20 m/s.  This is only viable in short range however, as farther distances cause the light to dissipate too much.

Name: Caimian Selura
Tier: B
Djinn: Caim
Cost: 30 Magoi
Type: Razor Magic
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 m
Duration: Instantaneous
Cool-Down: 5 Posts
Description: Using small particulates such as sand, dirt, or even water, Caim gives them a razor edge as they fly in a outward cone towards opponents.  This can be done as easily as making a cut through an object.  The cone is 20 m wide and long at it's farthest point.  Anything caught within the cone is dealt B tier damage by the shrapnel.  The shrapnel travels at 20 m/s.

I see you nerfed your range in this, as max range for B tier is 30m. That's fine, if you want it like that. You might want to consider making this a technique you can sustain for a turn or three, hand move it around like a lightsaber essentially.


Anyways, for the quick and dirty of hammering this out for you: Make sure to put the speed at which the technique moves in your description for Caimian Laser. Speed of light does not work, because it can at max go 20 m/s. Also, how big is the beam of light in diameter that you channel through your blade?


For Caimian Flayer, you should add something in there that shows how you make these things move. Something could be as simple as 'making a cut through a material, I propel a cone of it towards an opponent while giving it a razor edge that deals B tier damage to anything it touches'.

To add to this, you can only have two abilities at Page rank, so these would have to wait until you hit Knight.

These are his two page abilities Diego. Altair asked me to delete his previous thread and the abilities along with them.

bump for edit.

Everything here looks like it checks out. I believe Yaku will have to verify, first.

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[b]Name:[/b] Caimian Laser
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Djinn:[/b] Caim
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Type:[/b] Razor Magic
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user uses his blade as a reflective surface, and shines a light upon an opponent.  The light is given a razor edge by Caim, and deals B tier damage to whatever is struck.  The beam is 1 inch in diameter.  The beam moves at 20 m/s.  This is only viable in short range however, as farther distances cause the light to dissipate too much.

[b]Name:[/b] Caimian Flayer
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Djinn:[/b] Caim
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Type:[/b] Razor Magic
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Using small particulates such as sand, dirt, or even water, Caim gives them a razor edge as they fly in a outward cone towards opponents.  This can be done as easily as making a cut through an object.  The cone is 20 m wide and long at it's farthest point.  Anything caught within the cone is dealt B tier damage by the shrapnel.  The shrapnel travels at 20 m/s.

 

i just changed the names to make them more spell/magic sounding.

Following Djinn spells approved for training:

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[b]Name:[/b] Caimian Reza
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Djinn:[/b] Caim
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Type:[/b] Razor Magic
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user uses his blade as a reflective surface, and shines a light upon an opponent.  The light is given a razor edge by Caim, and deals B tier damage to whatever is struck.  The beam is 1 inch in diameter.  The beam moves at 20 m/s.  This is only viable in short range however, as farther distances cause the light to dissipate too much.

[b]Name:[/b] Caimian Selura
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Djinn:[/b] Caim
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Type:[/b] Razor Magic
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Using small particulates such as sand, dirt, or even water, Caim gives them a razor edge as they fly in a outward cone towards opponents.  This can be done as easily as making a cut through an object.  The cone is 20 m wide and long at it's farthest point.  Anything caught within the cone is dealt B tier damage by the shrapnel.  The shrapnel travels at 20 m/s.

Caimian Selura approved:

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p15-ability-vouchers#12974

Cashing in my B-Tier Ability Voucher for Caimian Reza.

Ability voucher deducted. Ability also added.