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1 Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 01:23 am

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Name: Godspeed [Magoi Manipulation]            
Tier:  A                            
Cost:  40/20 Sustain                
Weapon Type: N/A              
Class: Supplementary
Range:  Self
Duration:
Cool-Down: 14 posts
Description: By manipulating the flow of Magoi in ones own body, the user becomes capable of achieving unbelievable speeds. Furthermore, the presence of Johnatan's Topaz of Righteousness increases this capabilities even more. The user is able to move constantly at 37 m/s for as much as 5 posts.  
                                                 
(A-Tier speed 25 m/s*1.5 =37)

Topaz Non-Slots:

Name: Light Blade    
Tier: C          
Cost:  20/10 Sustain
Weapon Type: Light Sword
Class: Supplementary  
Range:  Self
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: The energy of Johnatan's Topaz flows through the blade turning it into light. In this state it is unaffected by physical attacks and deals C-Tier light elemental damage upon contact. However, magoi manipulation abilities or magical spells still affect it as if normal. The effect wears after 3 posts.

Name: Sun's Radiance      
Tier: C        
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: Light Sword  
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: Johnatan's Topaz imbues the holder weapon in incandecent light. At a rate of 15 m/s a blinding flash expands for up to 20 meters blinding anyone unprepared for 2 posts. This impairs vision and even disorientation like a flash granade.

Name: Apollo's Pillar  
Tier: C    
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: Light Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: The user channels Johnatan's Topaz's powers through the body of the blade before releasing it into a 5 meter Diameter beam of light that travels at 15 m/s for as long as 20 meters, dealing C-Tier damage along with 2nd degree burns caused by the concentration and friction of the light particles in the beam.

Johnathan's Topaz:

Name: Johnathan’s Topaz of Righteousness
Tier: N/A
Type: Ruler Gem
Magic Type: Light
Appearance: A bright gem that always is glowing a steady yellow/orange color. The gem is slightly larger than the others making it about the size of a baseball. The gem was used by a hero from the past, Johnathan Lancestar. He set nearly three thousand slaves free during his life and even founded his own nation though it was short lived.
Function:

  • The user can place this in any object making it a Light elemental object. Can register 3 Light magic abilities that do not take up any of their slots. These abilities can be as strong as 1 tier lower than the owner.
  • The gem will allow the person to move at a base speed of 10 m/s and give all speed boosting skills and increase of 1.5x normal.


*This does not take up any of your item/weapon slots; only one of the Ruler Gems can be owned per person.



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2 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 01:58 am

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These abilities can be as strong as 1 tier lower than the owner.

Would you like to change your abilities first?


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3 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 11:22 am

Farah

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The 3 light abilities that take no slot have to be the Tier lower. All of them are C-Tier while I'm B.

The first one is a regular strength Ability and my first and only A-Rank (Only 1 at B-Tier). I'm not actually sure I see the problem

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4 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 03:41 pm

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I haven't really taken a look at these yet. But I will do so once you fix what I'm about to point out.

The user can place this in any object making it a Light elemental object. Can register 3 Light magic abilities that do not take up any of their slots. These abilities can be as strong as 1 tier lower than the owner.

This does not mean that you can make more than three light magic abilities so long as you use up ability slots. You only get the 3 light magic abilities. No more.

That being said, one of your light magic spells needs to go. Pick one and I'll check the remainders later~


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5 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 03:51 pm

Farah

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Thanks, I was not sure about it.

One deleted~

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6 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 04:01 pm

Duquin

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Duration
-You aren't allowed to simply sustain abilities until you run out of magoi. Supplementaries with absolutely no battle use which are only flavor text and the gravity magic flight spells are the only exceptions. So your abilities need a duration in posts.

Light Body
-You can't turn your body into light. That would require life magic in addition to light magic.

Everything else looks fine to me.


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7 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 05:21 pm

Farah

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-Bump

How does this look?

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8 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 20/07/14, 05:36 pm

Duquin

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I like your alternative to Light Body <3

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[b]Name:[/b] Godspeed [Magoi Manipulation]            
[b]Tier:[/b]  A                            
[b]Cost:[/b]  40/20 Sustain                
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] N/A              
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b]  Self
[b]Duration:[/b] 5 
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 14 posts
[b]Description:[/b] By manipulating the flow of Magoi in ones own body, the user becomes capable of achieving unbelievable speeds. Furthermore, the presence of Johnatan's Topaz of Righteousness increases this capabilities even more. The user is able to move constantly at 37 m/s for as much as 5 posts.  
                                                 
(A-Tier speed 25 m/s*1.5 =37)

Approved, no need to train these
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[b]Name:[/b] Light Blade    
[b]Tier:[/b] C          
[b]Cost:[/b]  20/10 Sustain
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Light Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary  
[b]Range:[/b]  Self
[b]Duration:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 4 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] The energy of Johnatan's Topaz flows through the blade turning it into light. In this state it is unaffected by physical attacks and deals C-Tier light elemental damage upon contact. However, magoi manipulation abilities or magical spells still affect it as if normal. The effect wears after 3 posts.

[b]Name:[/b] Sun's Radiance      
[b]Tier:[/b] C        
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Light Sword  
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Johnatan's Topaz imbues the holder weapon in incandecent light. At a rate of 15 m/s a blinding flash expands for up to 20 meters blinding anyone unprepared for 2 posts. This impairs vision and even disorientation like a flash granade.

[b]Name:[/b] Apollo's Pillar  
[b]Tier:[/b] C    
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Light Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user channels Johnatan's Topaz's powers through the body of the blade before releasing it into a 5 meter Diameter beam of light that travels at 15 m/s for as long as 20 meters, dealing C-Tier damage along with 2nd degree burns caused by the concentration and friction of the light particles in the beam.


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9 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 21/07/14, 03:32 am

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10 Re: Farah's Topaz Abilities on 21/07/14, 03:27 pm

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Training Approved


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