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1Life Magic For Death Uses Empty Life Magic For Death Uses 10/09/19, 07:57 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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Eating of Flesh
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:The caster must stand still while gathering their magoi and chant in incantation of the spell's name commanding the ruhk to effect it's target.
Scaling: AoE: Every 10 magoi poured into the spell expands the AoE by 5 meters
Sustain:0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Magic swirls around the caster as they stab their stave into the ground. Upon doing so purple magic burst from the stave and lifts into the air, black butterfly like creatures known as ruhk sputter around in a spiral as the caster's life magic forms into a green mist that covers a 5 meter sphere inflicting them with a flesh eating bacteria crafted from life magic. Once a person other than the caster enters the mist they are infected with the bacteria in the form of a rash that slowly eats at their flesh resulting in a green puss filled sore dealing D tier damage. The mist last for 2 post before fading away in the wind. The rash appears where contact with the mist was made.



Last edited by Julius Plageuis on 13/09/19, 04:55 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Life Magic For Death Uses Empty Re: Life Magic For Death Uses 11/09/19, 01:01 am

Trently

Trently
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Just say 10m diameter circle, that is easier to understand by language of the site in my opinion and a more reasonable dimension. 10m wide and 10m long is too long for D-Tier. A 5m radius, in other words, a 10m diameter circle is suitable for D-Tier. This means 5m from you on all sides. So remove where you say 10x10 meter circle.

How long does this mist last? It sounds indefinite. A single post would be more appropriate and reasonable considering this is D-Tier.

It makes more sense for the mist to affect the entire body rather than a mist appears and green puss filled sore on one part that spreads. For an ability like that, I imagine it would have to be Supplementary and be at least C-Tier.

3Life Magic For Death Uses Empty Re: Life Magic For Death Uses 13/09/19, 09:53 pm

Trently

Trently
A-Tier
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Eating of Flesh
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:The caster must stand still while gathering their magoi and chant in incantation of the spell's name commanding the ruh.
Scaling: AoE: Every 10 magoi poured into the spell expands the AoE 10m diameter meter sphere by 10m more meters.
Sustain:0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Magic swirls around the caster as they stab their stave into the ground. Upon doing so purple magic burst from the stave and lifts into the air, black butterfly like creatures known as ruhk sputter around in a spiral as the caster's life magic forms into a green mist that covers a 8meter diameter sphere around him, inflicting others with a flesh eating bacteria crafted from life magic. The mist is 2m far from him upon cast. Once a person even if the caster enters, bacteria in the form of a rash will slowly eat at their flesh resulting in a slight sickly green hue to the flesh dealing D tier damage. The mist lasts for the entire post before dispersing by the next post. The rash appears where contact with the mist is made.


Eating of Flesh
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:The caster must stand still while gathering their magoi and chant in incantation of the spell's name commanding the ruh.
Scaling: AoE: Every 10 magoi poured into the spell expands the AoE 10m diameter meter sphere by 10m more meters.
Sustain:0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Magic swirls around the caster as they stab their stave into the ground. Upon doing so purple magic burst from the stave and lifts into the air, black butterfly like creatures known as ruhk sputter around in a spiral as the caster's life magic forms into a green mist that covers a 3 meter diameter sphere around him, inflicting others with a flesh eating bacteria crafted from life magic. The mist is 2m far from him upon cast. Once a person even if the caster enters, bacteria in the form of a rash will slowly eat at their flesh resulting in a slight sickly green hue to the flesh dealing D tier damage to the skin. The mist lasts for 2 posts before dispersing. The rash appears where contact with the mist is made.



I made some small edits to your ability, and provided two versions of your ability. If any are to your liking, we may move forward with approval. Please keep in mind a 8m or 3m meter diameter sphere means 8m or 3m from one end of the sphere to the other end (really 10m for version A and 5m for version B but, in the middle there is a 2m diameter space for you are not affected by the mist). I hope this all makes sound sense to you?

4Life Magic For Death Uses Empty Re: Life Magic For Death Uses 16/09/19, 12:06 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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I'll take the first suggestion bud

5Life Magic For Death Uses Empty Re: Life Magic For Death Uses 16/09/19, 12:09 am

Trently

Trently
A-Tier
A-Tier

It is approved!

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[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]The caster must stand still while gathering their magoi and chant in incantation of the spell's name commanding the ruh.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE: Every 10 magoi poured into the spell expands the AoE 10m diameter meter sphere by 10m more meters.
[b]Sustain:[/b]0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
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Magic swirls around the caster as they stab their stave into the ground. Upon doing so purple magic burst from the stave and lifts into the air, black butterfly like creatures known as ruhk sputter around in a spiral as the caster's life magic forms into a green mist that covers a 8meter diameter sphere around him, inflicting others with a flesh eating bacteria crafted from life magic. The mist is 2m far from him upon cast. Once a person even if the caster enters, bacteria in the form of a rash will slowly eat at their flesh resulting in a slight sickly green hue to the flesh dealing D tier damage. The mist lasts for the entire post before dispersing by the next post. The rash appears where contact with the mist is made.[/list]

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