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1Magos Alexius  Empty Magos Alexius on 02/06/19, 07:04 pm

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Name: Magos Alexius
Country Affiliation: Balbadd
Race: Human
Tier: D
Class: Beast Tamer
Age + Birthdate: Age: 17| 23rd of August
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Magos is very energetic. He loves to help people and help animals as well. Whenever he sees someone bullying someone else he steps up for them. He is the kind of person you would want as a friend and not an enemy. It is rare for him to not be energetic and happy. If he is sad, something must have happened to him of the worst kind. He likes people and people likes him. He is incredibly dangerous because he has the ability to make friends wherever he goes. He is not the kind to make enemies with. He is kinda like Sinbad but he lives in Balbadd. He usually tears gangs and bad guilds with his swordsmanship. He is not fond of bad guilds and gangs he hates them. It reminds him of his siblings and how they acted. One of his siblings created a gang, but he tore apart that guild too. Barely any of his siblings get along with him. He loves them, but they hate him. They are jealous because he makes all the friends, but they don’t. That’s why they hate him. He cares for them and goes out of his way to achieve their goal, but they do the exact opposite. They treat him like garbage, and they take him for granted.

Likes: He is very fond of fighting. He simply just loves the thrill of combat and the outcomes.

Dislikes: He doesn’t take kindly to Black Rukh. He hates people who are affiliated with Black Rukh in any kind of way.

Aspirations: His main goal is to make the world a better place. He grew up in a dangerous environment, but he didn’t let that get the best of him. He strives to make people better than they are. Even if he gets hurt in the process, he will still keep going. He loves to make people happy, even if he’s sad he will not stop until the world is happy and satisfied. He promised to his mother that he will make her proud.

Phobias/fears: He is afraid of getting consumed by the Black Rukh, because of his behavior. Some of his siblings were consumed already at a young age. He is scared of letting that get the best of him. He tries to convince his siblings to do the right thing and stop but they didn’t listen to him. Some of them ended up dying because of their actions. In the end he didn't feel bad about it, because they didn't listen to them. They got what they deserved because they already had it coming to them.

Face-Claim: Unknown Character

Hair Color: Magos’ hair is a crimson red with black strands of hair

Eye Color: His eye color is red.

Height: 6’2

Weight: 128lbs

Appearance: Magos is a young man, wearing a red kimono with flower petal designs. He has golden outlines on the ends of the kimono and fur on the collar. He has an arm brace going up half his arm and ending by his hand. The other side of the kimono is white. He also has bandages on top of his arm brace. He appears to be holding a fan and a katana because they remind him what he was here to do. He is very handsome (other ladies said that) and he has a muscular build. It is usually very hot in Balbadd so that’s why he has a fan.

Rukh Alignment: White Rukh

Special Features: N/A

History: Magos born on August 23rd was always the leader of the pack in his family. His brothers and sisters look up to him since he was the oldest. His family wasn’t that rich, he used to help his mother make money by selling food to the locals of Balbadd. One day, he came home from work and finds his mother dead and his brothers and sisters crying over her body. Magos’ heart filled with rage and swore to find out who killed his mother. He continued to work until he had raised enough money to get out of poverty. It had been 2 years since his mother died, and he had gotten nowhere. He still didn’t have enough money to get out of poverty and his brothers and sisters were starving. Suddenly, a carriage was passing through the neighborhood and the man inside saw the kids. The man who was in the carriage was a Noble. He recognized Magos and his siblings as Magos’ mother’s children because Magos’ mother was also a maid and the Noble fell in love with her, but he didn’t get the chance to tell her how he felt. So he took them in the carriage and they didn’t have a single thing to worry about for years. The servants instantly changed them out of their clothes and gave them proper clothes. They were fed so much that they didn’t want to eat for 2 days. Magos’ didn’t eat as much as his siblings. One day, the noble died of a heart attack and Magos was sent all of his stuff, but he didn’t want to have the responsibilities as his father so he split the gear between his siblings and the newly-made guild. While he was gone the siblings gained a lot of money and therefore got greedy. So much that whenever one of them would ask for some money they would say no so loud, that the locals outside heard it. Once Magos came back the guild was in chaos. His siblings had been stealing from each other while they weren’t looking and everybody was killing each other. It took some time to fix the guild, but everything is at peace. He also didn’t get to meet his father.



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2Magos Alexius  Empty Re: Magos Alexius on 04/06/19, 12:13 am

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I welcome you to the site, Magos.

However, before we can let you set out into the world we need to address a few changes that have to be made first.

  • Unbold the word "Male" beside Gender.

  • Aspirations and Phobias/Fears are not yet at the minimum wordcount required. Please add a couple more sentences to each.

  • For your Face Claim, tell us their name and what series they are from. Your Face Claim is the character or image you are using to portray what Magos Alexius looks like. If the image is a random image or you cannot find the source or it is an original character, just put Original Character or Unknown Character beside your Face Claim.

  • For your Height and Weight, I thought I would let you know that 195 pounds is quite heavy for 5'3, and therefore I would advise his weight to be more about 120 pounds. You can do that or scale his height up to 6'4, it is really up to you.

  • In regards to appearance, if you may, please remove references to Japan but you can keep the kimono, fan, and katana with no problem. Just bear in mind that Japan does not exist on our site but Kina, an island nation inspired by real life Japan does. The culture of Kina is not isolated to the Kina nation however, as their popular culture has bled out into other places ever so slightly. Add about two more sentences for history and reach the 100 word minimum for appearance.

  • I apologise but, you cannot begin with draconic physiology but worry not because you can after you are approved by using what is called a Shard of Solomon to gain a draconic like trait. However, do keep in mind it is advised that new players hold onto their shard as it can save you from death once.

  • Lastly, let us address you history. New players are not allowed to be related to royalty or leaders of a country. The very closest thing to a king you may be related to are nobles of a country. Considering your character is affiliated with Balbadd, please note that Balbadd has no official king, as it is a republic. Remove every instance of "king" and your character rising to the throne and anything having to do with royalty and a kingdom. Do not feel too discouraged however, you can still create a country and become a king but it is a lot of effort and will be a strenuous journey forging your kingdom.


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3Magos Alexius  Empty Re: Magos Alexius on 04/06/19, 12:31 am

I fixed it. I fixed everything that was wrong.

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4Magos Alexius  Empty Re: Magos Alexius on 04/06/19, 01:23 am

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Character approved~

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[b]Name:[/b] Magos Alexius
[b]Country Affiliation: [/b] Balbadd
[b]Race: [/b] Fanalis
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] Age: 17| 23rd of August
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Sexuality:[/b] Straight
[b]Personality:[/b] Magos is very energetic. He loves to help people and help animals as well. Whenever he sees someone bullying someone else he steps up for them. He is the kind of person you would want as a friend and not an enemy. It is rare for him to not be energetic and happy. If he is sad, something must have happened to him of the worst kind. He likes people and people likes him. He is incredibly dangerous because he has the ability to make friends wherever he goes. He is not the kind to make enemies with. He is kinda like Sinbad but he lives in Balbadd. He usually tears gangs and bad guilds with his swordsmanship. He is not fond of bad guilds and gangs he hates them. It reminds him of his siblings and how they acted. One of his siblings created a gang, but he tore apart that guild too. Barely any of his siblings get along with him. He loves them, but they hate him. They are jealous because he makes all the friends, but they don’t. That’s why they hate him. He cares for them and goes out of his way to achieve their goal, but they do the exact opposite. They treat him like garbage, and they take him for granted.

[b]Likes:[/b] He is very fond of fighting. He simply just loves the thrill of combat and the outcomes.

[b]Dislikes:[/b] He doesn’t take kindly to Black Rukh. He hates people who are affiliated with Black Rukh in any kind of way.

[b]Aspirations:[/b] His main goal is to make the world a better place. He grew up in a dangerous environment, but he didn’t let that get the best of him. He strives to make people better than they are. Even if he gets hurt in the process, he will still keep going. He loves to make people happy, even if he’s sad he will not stop until the world is happy and satisfied. He promised to his mother that he will make her proud.

[b]Phobias/fears:[/b] He is afraid of getting consumed by the Black Rukh, because of his behavior. Some of his siblings were consumed already at a young age. He is scared of letting that get the best of him. He tries to convince his siblings to do the right thing and stop but they didn’t listen to him. Some of them ended up dying because of their actions. In the end he didn't feel bad about it, because they didn't listen to them. They got what they deserved because they already had it coming to them.

[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Unknown Character

[b]Hair Color:[/b] Magos’ hair is a crimson red with black strands of hair

[b]Eye Color:[/b] His eye color is red.

[b]Height:[/b] 6’2

[b]Weight:[/b] 128lbs

[b]Appearance:[/b] Magos is a young man, wearing a red kimono with flower petal designs. He has golden outlines on the ends of the kimono and fur on the collar. He has an arm brace going up half his arm and ending by his hand. The other side of the kimono is white. He also has bandages on top of his arm brace. He appears to be holding a fan and a katana because they remind him what he was here to do. He is very handsome (other ladies said that) and he has a muscular build. It is usually very hot in Balbadd so that’s why he has a fan.

[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] White Rukh

[b]Special Features:[/b] N/A

[b]History:[/b] Magos born on August 23rd was always the leader of the pack in his family. His brothers and sisters look up to him since he was the oldest. His family wasn’t that rich, he used to help his mother make money by selling food to the locals of Balbadd. One day, he came home from work and finds his mother dead and his brothers and sisters crying over her body. Magos’ heart filled with rage and swore to find out who killed his mother. He continued to work until he had raised enough money to get out of poverty. It had been 2 years since his mother died, and he had gotten nowhere. He still didn’t have enough money to get out of poverty and his brothers and sisters were starving. Suddenly, a carriage was passing through the neighborhood and the man inside saw the kids. The man who was in the carriage was a Noble. He recognized Magos and his siblings as Magos’ mother’s children because Magos’ mother was also a maid and the Noble fell in love with her, but he didn’t get the chance to tell her how he felt. So he took them in the carriage and they didn’t have a single thing to worry about for years. The servants instantly changed them out of their clothes and gave them proper clothes. They were fed so much that they didn’t want to eat for 2 days. Magos’ didn’t eat as much as his siblings. One day, the noble died of a heart attack and Magos was sent all of his stuff, but he didn’t want to have the responsibilities as his father so he split the gear between his siblings and the newly-made guild. While he was gone the siblings gained a lot of money and therefore got greedy. So much that whenever one of them would ask for some money they would say no so loud, that the locals outside heard it. Once Magos came back the guild  was in chaos. His siblings had been stealing from each other while they weren’t looking and everybody was killing each other. It took some time to fix the guild, but everything is at peace. He also didn’t get to meet his father.


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