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1Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] Empty Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] on 23/02/19, 09:07 am

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Kutter's Katana [Magic Weapon]:

Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] DragonKatana
Name: Kutter's Katana
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Magic Weapon - Sword
Magic Type: Razor (Wind + Strength)
Appearance: This 100 cm long katana once belonged to Kutter, an adventurer from Kou who lost to against Caim's traps. The body of the adventurer was swallowed up, but the sword remained, absorbing the magoi of the dungeon and eventually gaining powerful magic. With a 75 cm blade length, 1.5 cm blade thickness, 25 cm handle length, and a 15 cm guard diameter, this sword is indeed as beautiful as it is sharp.
Function:

  • Subatomic Slice - The user feeds magoi into the sword using two hands, causing the sword to coat its blade in an immeasurably sharp razor edge. The next slash of the blade will send a flying edge of razor magic up to 20m through the air severing things with A-Tier damage. Things cut with razor magic are unable to be put back together again regardless of healing spells used on them for a minimum of 3 posts. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.


Kaze Ha
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must slash his katana toward where he would like the ability to be aimed.
Scaling: Layers
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

    When the user fills this weapon with magoi they can then slash producing an airslash which travels 40m. The blade of sharp wind is 15m wide long, 1.5cm blade thickness, and travels at A-Tier flight speed through the air severing things with A-Tier damage. It will cleanly slice anything it comes into contact with, beside its own user. If scaled, a 1cm thick layer will coat the razor blade of wind, doubling the damage potential per scale.


Kaze Baria
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Defensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must slash his katana in a wide arc motion.
Scaling: Layers
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

    The user pours magoi into his katana and casts an ability that forms a perfect spherical barrier of razor magic all around him which defends him and any allies within it from up to A-Tier damage. It takes shape in a 10 meter radius from his initial cast and stops at the surface beneath the user if there is one, if not, it surrounds 10m under the user as well.


Kaze Odoroki
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must slash his katana toward where he would like the ability to be aimed.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 20
Description:

    The user slashes their katana aimed toward a target either up close or up to 30m far and a razor sharp gust of wind is conjured where the target is and it blows on them with great force. It will blow on them suddenly without a warning and blow them up into the air 15m high if standing on a surface or bring them violently down 15m below. The gust of wind is 5m wide and 5m tall and will cut people and deal B-Tier cuts. User can control the direction the gust of wind blows.



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2Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] Empty Re: Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] on 30/06/19, 01:38 am

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I am bumping this for grading.


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3Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] Empty Re: Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] on 05/07/19, 02:17 pm

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Kaze Ha: You have it listed as supplementary but the ability seems to be offensive. Your wording also seems to repeat itself, or atleast that's how the description seems to me. You could omit the first sentence and say something along the lines of "When the user fills this weapon with magoi they can then slash producing an airslash which travels 40m" and then including the dimensions and damage of the ability.

Kaze Baria: This seems to be defensive all around at first but then you change it saying it does damage. Is it defensive or offensive, if its defensive it can't do damage. I would personally suggest keeping it defensive, you have a solid assault alot but an aoe defense like this will be useful especially when you have allies or others you may nor want to harm.

Kaze Odoroki: Seems good, I'd just reduce the distance to about 30m and the pushback 15 or 10m as its supplementary/offensive ability. I really enjoy the premise of this one, you could also just choose to say you can control the direction which the gust blows, so you could send people up even farther or push/slam someone further into the ground.


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4Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] Empty Re: Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] on 05/07/19, 04:40 pm

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I made edits.


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5Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] Empty Re: Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] on 07/07/19, 10:38 am

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Even further on the path to become a warrior of the storm., Approved for training.

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[b]Name:[/b] Kutter's Katana
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Magic Weapon - Sword
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Razor (Wind + Strength)
[b]Appearance:[/b] This 100 cm long katana once belonged to Kutter, an adventurer from Kou who lost to against Caim's traps. The body of the adventurer was swallowed up, but the sword remained, absorbing the magoi of the dungeon and eventually gaining powerful magic. With a 75 cm blade length, 1.5 cm blade thickness, 25 cm handle length, and a 15 cm guard diameter, this sword is indeed as beautiful as it is sharp.
[b]Function:[/b]
[list]
[*][b]Subatomic Slice -[/b] The user feeds magoi into the sword using two hands, causing the sword to coat its blade in an immeasurably sharp razor edge. The next slash of the blade will send a flying edge of razor magic up to 20m through the air severing things with A-Tier damage. Things cut with razor magic are unable to be put back together again regardless of healing spells used on them for a minimum of 3 posts. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.
[/list]
[/spoiler]

[center][b]Kaze Ha[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must slash his katana toward where he would like the ability to be aimed.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Layers
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
When the user fills this weapon with magoi they can then slash producing an airslash which travels 40m. The blade of sharp wind is 15m wide long, 1.5cm blade thickness, and travels at A-Tier flight speed through the air severing things with A-Tier damage. It will cleanly slice anything it comes into contact with, beside its own user. If scaled, a 1cm thick layer will coat the razor blade of wind, doubling the damage potential per scale.[/list]

[center][b]Kaze Baria[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must slash his katana in a wide arc motion.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Layers
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user pours magoi into his katana and casts an ability that forms a perfect spherical barrier of razor magic all around him which defends him and any allies within it from up to A-Tier damage. It takes shape in a 10 meter radius from his initial cast and stops at the surface beneath the user if there is one, if not, it surrounds 10m under the user as well.[/list]

[center][b]Kaze Odoroki[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary/Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must slash his katana toward where he would like the ability to be aimed.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user slashes their katana aimed toward a target either up close or up to 30m far and a razor sharp gust of wind is conjured where the target is and it blows on them with great force. It will blow on them suddenly without a warning and blow them up into the air 15m high if standing on a surface or bring them violently down 15m below. The gust of wind is 5m wide and 5m tall and will cut people and deal B-Tier cuts. User can control the direction the gust of wind blows.[/list]


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6Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] Empty Re: Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] on 07/07/19, 03:12 pm

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7Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] Empty Re: Kaze Tori [Kutter Katana] on 10/07/19, 08:36 pm

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Training approved, interesting read. I enjoyed reading about how Trent has learned from the war, how its seemed to affect his way of thinking. I cant wait to see more of how Trentlys interactions shape or change his approach towards the world.


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