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1 OK HECTOR! IM RELOADED! on 13/08/18, 07:38 pm

You want pressure?
Tier: B
Class: WARRIOR
Type: Supplementary
Range:Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jahanghir must strike his target with his [BLKCLW] for the ability to activate.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description: Jahanghir strikes an opponent with his BLKCLW, who may clash with his attack. If a person or object being held is struck by him, Jahanghirs strength will spread through their body. This sends vibrations through them which temporarily shocks their central nervous system. This makes it difficult for the target to use their bodies natural strength, downgrading their strength by a B tier for 2 posts.



KAT WILLIAMS LONGEST LINE

Tier: C
Class: WARRIOR
Type: Supplementary
Range:CLOSE
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jahanghir must strike his target using his [BLKCLW] for the ability to activate
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
Description: Jahanghir backhands an enemy using his BLKCLW with great force. The ferocity of the strike produces strong concussive force which may travel through their weapon and body inflicting damage on the weak tendons (such as those found in the hands, wrists, ankles and feet.)
This makes it painful for the effective target to move for 1 post, slowing their natural speed by a C-tier.




BLACK LION PURSUIT
Tier: B
Class: WARRIOR
Type: OFFENSE
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:Jahanghir must keep his body in the air as he hones into his target during the leap.
Scaling: HITS
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description: Jahanghir perfects the pouncing attack, He pounces up to 15 meters only ever hovering across the ground by 3 centimeters. When he reaches a target he strikes with a powerful open palm, which sends a wave of his overbearing strength through his opponent. This force creates a meter wide hit-box(the area of which his force inflicts damage), and deals B tier damage to anything it makes contact with.



Running Hands
Tier: B
Class: WARRIOR
Type: DEFENSIVE
Range:CLOSE
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jahanghir must be able to lift his BLKCLW, and visibly see the incoming attacks
Scaling: DMG
Sustain:0
Cool Down:3
Cost: 30
Description: Jahanghir lifts his right arm targeting up to an B tier amount of damage to block, which enters within 24 cm of him. While this may block projectiles or melee attacks, they must be physical.



Last edited by Emperor JaJa on 04/09/18, 05:23 pm; edited 8 times in total


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2 Re: OK HECTOR! IM RELOADED! on 13/08/18, 09:34 pm

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You want pressure: An interesting effect but I need to ask other staff on their opinions

No Name: Needs a name, sounds morr like you eant an interupt because a stun isnt really an effect under our systems.

Black Lion Pursuit: Range would be long if you lept 15m hovering over the ground. Also sounds both supplementary and offensive. Lower damage if thats your intetion or make requirement for the impact to be you crashing during a leap.

Running Hands: Just fix measurement to metric.


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3 Re: OK HECTOR! IM RELOADED! on 31/08/18, 03:29 am

Bumped. Also, I didnt intend "Black Lion Pursuit" to be supp/offensive. I wasn't trying to describe an effect but rather the way in which the strike inflicts damage. The hitbox is a description of the impact of the blunt force. I can try to word this again if needed.

One more thing, Ive edited the drawback on "You want pressure" in regard to Duquin's suggestion.


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4 Re: OK HECTOR! IM RELOADED! on 31/08/18, 01:32 pm

my bad im pretty hasty, i have to add a requirment in Kat Williams Longest Line


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5 Re: OK HECTOR! IM RELOADED! on 02/09/18, 01:30 pm

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You want Pressure: Seems fine, just don't forget someone could probably heal this away since it's damage to the body technically but not meant as a pure damage ability.

Kat William's: Not really sure what the effect of this is.

Black Lion Pursuit: I'm fine with this, just know the movement is not enhanced past usual and it's akin to a normal leap.


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6 Re: OK HECTOR! IM RELOADED! on 04/09/18, 05:20 pm

1. Noted.
2. My bad sometimes Im all over the place with these.
3. I just made it so that I could put my feet back down on the ground quickly.


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7 Re: OK HECTOR! IM RELOADED! on 06/09/18, 01:43 pm

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Approved for Training.


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