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1Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 27/06/18, 02:46 pm

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Name: Bertex
Tier: C
Type: Normal
Species: Black Wolf
Appearance: He is a very large wolf, standing close to 1.2192 meters high and weighing around 362.8739 kg. He has jet black fur and red eyes with longer covered hair.
Beast Traits:

Trait Name:  Wolf Speed V1
Trait Tier: D-Rank
Trait Requirement: Black Wolf
Trait Description: Due to the species of wolf they are known for having amazing speed, because of this they start at C teir speed. This is equal to a cheetah in speed.
Trait Effect:  Bertex has C tier Speed

Trait Name: Lightning Wolf
Trait Tier: C Tier
Trait Requirement: Black Wolf
Trait Description: The biology of a lightning wolf includes the quality of their enhanced electrons. The hyperactivity of those electrons allows the wolf to have an excess amount of bioelectricity, which the creature uses at its leisure.
Trait Effect:  Bertex can register bioelectricity abilities.



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2Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 29/06/18, 10:21 am

For the description of the beast, please use the metric system, you can put them in parenthesis.

Wolf Speed V1: Give speed comparison on how fast the wolf could run, maybe as fast as cheetah? or as fast as horse? Also i think you put the wrong trait effect, maybe you meant C-tier speed?

Lightning Wolf: This should be C-tier trait


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3Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 05/07/18, 11:27 am

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4Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 06/07/18, 10:24 am

Wolf Speed V1: This one still doesnt have the speed comparison, please add it :)


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5Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 06/07/18, 11:11 am

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6Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 06/07/18, 12:32 pm

Priced at 20k, bump to purchase when you have enough Huang :)


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7Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 06/07/18, 01:21 pm

Oh wait... you said lightning wolf as the trait requirement
But the species is black wolf? Please change it.

Also the 20k price is because its a special beast...


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8Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 06/07/18, 01:52 pm

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9Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 07/07/18, 11:50 am

Okay so to be able to use bioelectrity trait, your wolf has to be a specific kind of wolf, which is lightning wolf, a special beast. Just to be clear and so there's no misunderstanding, when making skills using this trait, due to how electricity works, you wont be able to fire lightning bolt.

For example, Bertex will only able to generate an electrical current to shock people. But it needs more traits before it could send that electricity across a distance, like a trait to have a metallic magnetic coat of fur. Then it could shoot needles using electromagnetic forces to shoot something out that can be used to send the electric current across a distance to replicate a lightning bolt.

This special beast is priced at 20k and FYI, you still have 2 more trait points to spend.
Below is what the version that I tried to fix, if you are agree with it and have enough Huang to purchase it, please bump the thread :)

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[b]Name:[/b] Bertex
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Lightning Wolf
[b]Appearance:[/b] He is a very large wolf, standing close to 1.2192 meters high and weighing around 362.8739 kg. He has jet black fur and red eyes with longer covered hair.
[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name:[/b]  Wolf Speed V1
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Needs to be this specific kind of beast.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Due to the species of wolf they are known for having amazing speed, because of this they start at C-tier speed. This is equal to a cheetah in speed.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]  Bertex has C-tier Speed

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Lightning Wolf
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Needs to be this specific kind of beast.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] The biology of a lightning wolf includes the quality of their enhanced electrons. The hyperactivity of those electrons allows the wolf to have an excess amount of bioelectricity.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]  Bertex can register bioelectricity abilities from entire body parts.


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10Sara Mcdonald starting Beast Empty Re: Sara Mcdonald starting Beast on 23/07/18, 02:15 pm

spending the 20k to buy the beast.


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