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1Starter Abilities Empty Starter Abilities 25/06/18, 04:05 pm

Kota Leonhardt

Kota Leonhardt
D-Tier
D-Tier

C-Tier:

D-Tier:



Last edited by Kota Leonhardt on 30/06/18, 08:46 am; edited 5 times in total

2Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities 27/06/18, 01:05 pm

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Anima Poena : I dont think the headpain and eye closing is necessary, but if you want to keep it, then it's fine. Also put the size of the droplet and the range in the description (5 meters? 10? etc) as well. As for the scaling, just put "Damage" :)

Water Sphere : You can remove this part " and for this, it is easy to dodge it by just looking at the direction of the weapon. It's fairly easy to dodge due to its small size as well.". Please give the range too in the description. For the scaling, just put damage

Small Barrier : Can you describe what shape you gonna draw in the requirements? Like circle, or rectangle, etc? and what kind of chant? Also i personally think you dont have to put the drawbacks there. For the scaling, i think you can just change it to "AOE".

Protective Dome : If you want the dome to become larger after you scale it, you dont have to put "Dome will only fit the user." at the requirement. Please state how big the dome is. For the scaling, i think you can just change it to "AOE".

Tornado of Waves : For the range, i think you should put medium based on the range you wanna cover. For the requirement, just put "User waves wand in a circular motion." and move the rest of it to the description. For the hitting range, just say it will hit anyone up to 10m away from the user. Put "AOE" for the scaling and state the size of the tornado.
So you wanna be inside the tornado, right? Why dont you make it to appear around you instead of making it in front of you?

3Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities 27/06/18, 01:53 pm

Kota Leonhardt

Kota Leonhardt
D-Tier
D-Tier

Edited!

4Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities 29/06/18, 09:46 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Anima Poena: I just noticed that since you put medium for your range, your spell wont be getting more than 10m and you wont have to put this there " If the distance extends past 10 meters, the user will receive D-tier damage and feel great headpain that dishevels concentration."
I'd suggest to not giving your character a lot of drawbacks like this, especially one that will give you self damage from a simple spell  (Love him more D:).

Tornado of Waves: It wont be able to inflict D-tier damage since it's defensive skill, please remove it o:

5Starter Abilities Empty Re: Starter Abilities 30/06/18, 11:07 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

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Add to your vault ^^

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[center][b]Anima Poena[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] In order to summon the water droplets, user needs to concentrate and block out any visionary distractions. While he does this, the wand/staff is to be held in the air so that the water can be manipulated from a distance. This leaves the user vulnerable for a few seconds.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Focusing on the opponent, the user summons 4mm diameter water droplets behind an opponent that should stand 10 meters away in distance. They quickly spiral into a snake that dives at said opponent's neck into a pressure point causing immense pain and C-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Water Sphere[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Wand needs to be aimed in the desired direction for the sphere to fire.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A casual sphere formed water that is to be aimed at an opponent that should stand in the range of 15 meters. The size is fairly small, being only 3.5 cm diameters yet will deal D-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Small Barrier[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user draws a shape in the air while whispering a chant to create the form of the wall. That chant being a single word, one meaning transform in greek: Metatrepo.
When the wall is created, it is not possible to alter the position of it. Even if the user turns or moves away, it will stay in its original spot. The wall is thin and quite vulnerable to fire and can be weakened if melted.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AOE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By manipulating water to a solid form, the user creates a small, thin wall in front of him that blocks D-tier damage attacks. The shape may vary to befit to the user's position however it will stay in its 1-meter (diameter) size. Unless scaling is used.[/list]

[center][b]Protective Dome[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must be in contact with the liquid, whether directly or indirectly (through a wand).
[b]Scaling:[/b] AOE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Through the manipulation of water, a strong dome that includes a length of 190cm, as well as 100cm diameter, is formed, big enough to create a protective barrier that covers the user and protects him from D-tier damage. While the dome would be spacious enough to fit another person, that person would have to be smaller than the user (which might be impossible in Kota's case). Though with the help of scaling, the user would be able to change that.[/list]

[center][b]Tornado of Waves[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User waves wand in a circular motion before raising the wand above his head. Through the spinning water, user's vision of the outside becomes unclear.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AOE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
When initiated, a 5 meter water tornado will form in front the user's wand which is to be raised so the tornado may grow into a 15 meter diameter and envelop the user reflecting any D-tier attacks. [/list]

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