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1Horuss Creation Empty Horuss Creation on 24/06/18, 07:04 am

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Name:Horuss
Country Affiliation:Heliohapt
Race:Human
Tier:D-Tier
Class:Warrior
Age + Birthdate: 19 years of age, December 17
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Heterosexual
Personality:
Horuss is an extremely introverted individual, sticks to the back streets, and doesn’t like the most amount of attention attracted to him. When faced with conflict its his first instinct to the turn the other way, forgive and forget. On a normal basis he prefers reading quietly and practicing his swordsmanship, never does he go out looking to start trouble or cause problems for anyone. He’s very protective about the people and things he cares about and will do anything to protect them and keep them out of harm's way.

He doesn’t like violence or combat, but when it is the only option it’s his last resort. A very caring person on a daily basis you can find him helping those who truly need it such as the homeless or the less fortunate. A true bookworm and an intelligent individual, but not the kind of person to correct you on the spot. He sits back and observes enemies and allies all the same knowing that knowledge is the best weapon.

Honor is the most respectable quality of a man, and justice is its weapon words that he truly lives by believing in all things right and that it is his physical responsibility as a man to eliminate all things wrong with the world. His goal peace and the thing he strives for most in the world...he’ll do cut down anyone or anything that stands in the way of that goal.

Likes:
Swordsmanship: The beauty and the time that it takes to master someone's sword craft fascinate Horuss it’s a driving force in his life to understand and be a master of his blade.
Food: Never will he admit it but Horuss enjoys fine wine and dining a great meal with the right bottle to go with it appeals to the more boujee side of his personality.
Dislikes:
Crime: Crime or criminals, neither bode well with Horuss from past experiences he believes that anyone who seeks to do wrong should be eliminated.
Filth: A true neat freak everything has to be in order both physically and mentally to allow for Horuss to think properly.

Aspirations: He seeks to be the best swordsman in the land, and have the strength to stand against everything in that aligns with the side against justice. His goal is to right the wrongs done in Heliophat, the wrongs of which were done by his fathar and bring justice to the people, and pay the debts of his mother and right the past sins of his father. Horuss seeks to be the best swordsman in the land, and have the strength to accomplish all that he wishes to accomplishes. Justice and balance are the two things Horuss aspires for and hopefully at the end of his journey he wishes for himself a life of luxury knowing that all in the world is right.

Phobias/fears:Fear of Inadequacy - Ever since he was born all Horuss can remember is chasing. Chasing after his brothers and hoping that his feats compared to theres in the slightest, and that at the end of each and every day that his parents would look at him with the same love and passion they look at his siblings with so over his childhood Horuss developed a fear of never being enough for anyone in his life and that his the reason he strives for perfection in each and every aspect of it.
Face-Claim:Anubis(Pinterest Artist)
Hair Color:Gray
Eye Color:Green
Height:195.072(6’4”)
Weight:72.5748(160lbs)
Appearance: Grey shoulder length hair, that occasionally obstructs his face. Bright green eyes that can be spotted from across the room. Normally Horuss can be found in white robes that leave a large portion of his chest showing. Silver rings across his hands, along with one gold chain hanging down his neck that bears the symbol of protection known as the Eye of Horus his namesake.
Opened toed shoes are a custom for him no matter the climate or immediate weather conditions. His body language is very laid back no matter the situation, never truly standing to his full height as to not intimidate anyone he comes in to contact with. A smile is regularly found across his face, clear skin and always freshly bathed.
Rukh Alignment:White Rukh

Special Features:Horuss has to dog ears atop his head in place of normal human ears, this being caused from having life magic experience on him, over the years Horuss has never requested to have them removed having grown fond of them. Though Horuss still hears at the human level and the ears do not provide him with an auditory benefit.

History: Raised in the household of a Heliohapt noble, yet his birth was not as honest as his father's political position. Nobility his father was yet he was not perfect for one his concubines laid pregnant and the child was Horuss. He was to be raised no different than the other children yet the whole household knew he did not belong. His father was Set the Crooked a man of nobility mostly known for most of the behind the scenes illegal work in Heliohapt. His mother though was a different story for she was not born of nobility yet was a simple girl who had been traded in as payment at a young age to serve as payment for her father's debts.

Though she never liked her life she did find favor in the eyes of Set, so he freed her and allowed for he to stay in his household, and along with her life went her old name from that moment on she was known as Ebony. Horuss however never had a cinderella childhood for his father couldn’t show him affection believing that it would be to show a sign of weakness having his subjects see that he cared for a bastard child as much as one of his illegitimate children, so as a result he kept his distance. Never in his life had Horuss had his father's attention for the slightest of moments. When Set had laid his eyes on retirement he divided up his household and gave a portion to each of his seven sons yet the portion that was set aside for Horuss paled in comparison to those of the others. Though this didn’t matter Horuss had found someone in his life he loved more than anyone else.

Michael his father's bodyguard. Since he could walk Horuss wished to swing a sword and all thanks to Michael this became a reality. Michael trained Horuss in all aspects of swordsmanship and most importantly he informed him in what really makes a good man great. Yet this happiness was short lived Michael was slain while protecting Set from an attempted assassination now all to remember him bye is his blade.

Role-Play Sample:
As the sun rose so did Horuss, out of his bed and into his daily attire. All the while the scent of sweet flowers filling the air, even did he think that the joy that fills him currently would ever be a present aspect of his life, not after the passing of Michael. For Michael was the only father figure he ever knew, he taught him how to hold a blade, and how to kill with it but most important he taught him how to be a man and what it means to do right by others.
Michael instilled in Horus the qualities of justice and those qualities breathe within him forever. All those thoughts passed through his head as Horuss trimmed the roses, and it was set to be a perfect day to he heard the loud clang of metal against each other. When arriving at the balcony his suspicions had been assured the men of Heliohapt prepare for war.



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2Horuss Creation Empty Re: Horuss Creation on 25/06/18, 11:57 am

Aspirations: You have repeated sentence, please fix it

This one
Horuss aspires to right the wrongs done in Heliohapt and bring justice to the people, and pay the debts of his mother and right the past sins of his father. He seeks to be the best swordsman in the land, and have the strength to stand against everything in that aligns with the side against justice.

and this one basically has the same meaning
His goal is to right the wrongs done in Heliophatt and bring justice to the people, and pay the debts of his mother and right the past sins of his father. Horuss seeks to be the best swordsman in the land, and have the strength to stand against everything in that aligns with the side against justice. Justice and balance are the two things Horuss aspires for and hopefully at the end of his journey he wishes for himself a life of luxury knowing that all in the world is right

Special features: What do you mean by permanent curse? The curse magic here is the magic to make one cursed their live. Perhaps you mean he got some kind of life magic practices on him? Also, how is it permanent and cant be removed too?

History: We prefer you dont have any kind of relationship with the leader of the countries, even making the father as the right hand man. If you want to make him just as a noble, it is fine, but not as Pharaoh's anything.


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3Horuss Creation Empty Re: Horuss Creation on 27/06/18, 09:20 am

Alright so you did edited your apps

Here goes...
Aspirations: The aspirations still the same, Id suggest to remove some of the first part and use the second part. But first, I have to ask what kind of wrong done in Heliohapt that you were implying?

History: This part is still there "His father was Set the Crooked the Pharaohs most entrusted member of his court and the man who was tasked with all the dirty work in the kingdom. "

Please bump the thread after you make your edits


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4Horuss Creation Empty Re: Horuss Creation on 29/06/18, 11:33 pm

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[b]Name:[/b]Horuss
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b]Heliohapt
[b]Race:[/b]Human
[b]Tier:[/b]D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b]Warrior
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] 19 years of age, December 17
[b]Gender:[/b]Male
[b]Sexuality:[/b]Heterosexual
[b]Personality:[/b]
Horuss is an extremely introverted individual, sticks to the back streets, and doesn’t like the most amount of attention attracted to him. When faced with conflict its his first instinct to the turn the other way, forgive and forget. On a normal basis he prefers reading quietly and practicing his swordsmanship, never does he go out looking to start trouble or cause problems for anyone. He’s very protective about the people and things he cares about and will do anything to protect them and keep them out of harm's way.

He doesn’t like violence or combat, but when it is the only option it’s his last resort. A very caring person on a daily basis you can find him helping those who truly need it such as the homeless or the less fortunate. A true bookworm and an intelligent individual, but not the kind of person to correct you on the spot. He sits back and observes enemies and allies all the same knowing that knowledge is the best weapon.

Honor is the most respectable quality of a man, and justice is its weapon words that he truly lives by believing in all things right and that it is his physical responsibility as a man to eliminate all things wrong with the world. His goal peace and the thing he strives for most in the world...he’ll do cut down anyone or anything that stands in the way of that goal.

[b]Likes:[/b]
Swordsmanship: The beauty and the time that it takes to master someone's sword craft fascinate Horuss it’s a driving force in his life to understand and be a master of his blade.
Food: Never will he admit it but Horuss enjoys fine wine and dining a great meal with the right bottle to go with it appeals to the more boujee side of his personality.
[b]Dislikes:[/b]
Crime: Crime or criminals, neither bode well with Horuss from past experiences he believes that anyone who seeks to do wrong should be eliminated.
Filth: A true neat freak everything has to be in order both physically and mentally to allow for Horuss to think properly.

[b]Aspirations:[/b] He seeks to be the best swordsman in the land, and have the strength to stand against everything in that aligns with the side against justice. His goal is to right the wrongs done in Heliophat, the wrongs of which were done by his fathar and bring justice to the people, and pay the debts of his mother and right the past sins of his father. Horuss seeks to be the best swordsman in the land, and have the strength to accomplish all that he wishes to accomplishes. Justice and balance are the two things Horuss aspires for and hopefully at the end of his journey he wishes for himself a life of luxury knowing that all in the world is right.

[b]Phobias/fears:[/b]Fear of Inadequacy - Ever since he was born all Horuss can remember is chasing. Chasing after his brothers and hoping that his feats compared to theres in the slightest, and that at the end of each and every day that his parents would look at him with the same love and passion they look at his siblings with so over his childhood Horuss developed a fear of never being enough for anyone in his life and that his the reason he strives for perfection in each and every aspect of it.
[b]Face-Claim:[/b]Anubis(Pinterest Artist)
[b]Hair Color:[/b]Gray
[b]Eye Color:[/b]Green
[b]Height:[/b]195.072(6’4”)
[b]Weight:[/b]72.5748(160lbs)
[b]Appearance:[/b] Grey shoulder length hair, that occasionally obstructs his face. Bright green eyes that can be spotted from across the room. Normally Horuss can be found in white robes that leave a large portion of his chest showing. Silver rings across his hands, along with one gold chain hanging down his neck that bears the symbol of protection known as the Eye of Horus his namesake.
Opened toed shoes are a custom for him no matter the climate or immediate weather conditions. His body language is very laid back no matter the situation, never truly standing to his full height as to not intimidate anyone he comes in to contact with. A smile is regularly found across his face, clear skin and always freshly bathed.
[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b]White Rukh

[b]Special Features:[/b]Horuss has to dog ears atop his head in place of normal human ears, this being caused from having life magic experience on him, over the years Horuss has never requested to have them removed having grown fond of them. Though Horuss still hears at the human level and the ears do not provide him with an auditory benefit.

[b]History:[/b] Raised in the household of a Heliohapt noble, yet his birth was not as honest as his father's political position. Nobility his father was yet he was not perfect for one his concubines laid pregnant and the child was Horuss. He was to be raised no different than the other children yet the whole household knew he did not belong. His father was Set the Crooked a man of nobility mostly known for most of the behind the scenes illegal work in Heliohapt. His mother though was a different story for she was not born of nobility yet was a simple girl who had been traded in as payment at a young age to serve as payment for her father's debts.

Though she never liked her life she did find favor in the eyes of Set, so he freed her and allowed for he to stay in his household, and along with her life went her old name from that moment on she was known as Ebony. Horuss however never had a cinderella childhood for his father couldn’t show him affection believing that it would be to show a sign of weakness having his subjects see that he cared for a bastard child as much as one of his illegitimate children, so as a result he kept his distance. Never in his life had Horuss had his father's attention for the slightest of moments. When Set had laid his eyes on retirement he divided up his household and gave a portion to each of his seven sons yet the portion that was set aside for Horuss paled in comparison to those of the others. Though this didn’t matter Horuss had found someone in his life he loved more than anyone else.

Michael his father's bodyguard. Since he could walk Horuss wished to swing a sword and all thanks to Michael this became a reality. Michael trained Horuss in all aspects of swordsmanship and most importantly he informed him in what really makes a good man great. Yet this happiness was short lived Michael was slain while protecting Set from an attempted assassination now all to remember him bye is his blade.

[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]
As the sun rose so did Horuss, out of his bed and into his daily attire. All the while the scent of sweet flowers filling the air, even did he think that the joy that fills him currently would ever be a present aspect of his life, not after the passing of Michael. For Michael was the only father figure he ever knew, he taught him how to hold a blade, and how to kill with it but most important he taught him how to be a man and what it means to do right by others.
Michael instilled in Horus the qualities of justice and those qualities breathe within him forever. All those thoughts passed through his head as Horuss trimmed the roses, and it was set to be a perfect day to he heard the loud clang of metal against each other. When arriving at the balcony his suspicions had been assured the men of Heliohapt  prepare for war.


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